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Re: The first job
I Was inspired, When i was in a bank one day and they got held up so i wanted to right something bout it,
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: The first job
If i may review you mysel, your kinda an Asshole who likes to just fuck with peoples minds so ugh one more thing what kinda name is Birkhoff oh im ...
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: No Emotion
Anytime :)
Oct 31, 2013 -
Re: Home sweet home
Trying to thanks for the feedback
Oct 29, 2013 -
Re: Home sweet home
I'll just say this, Thanks for the HARSH attempt, I really enjoyed it :p Nah man all good thanks for your feedback
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: The Soul
Sorry kinda just did it fast and had to do something at the same time
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: The Man in the tower, Chapter 2 Contiued
hey i'm trying aint i, We can't all be as good as you right?|
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: The Man in the Tower, Chapter 1 (first Story)
By the way its part of the story not to know much till the end :P On how he got there or if its all a dream or not, So ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: The Unit
Story Touched me in places i love So Great work Made me feel like i was there And Detailed as well Keep it up Thanks Dragon
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Types of Poetry.
Very good and intresting and a lot to remember Thanks Dragon
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Wish
Okay it started Good, But better to say on this one you said Before it Vanishes from your eye? Would have been better if it was Before it Vanishes from ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: The Man in the Tower, Chapter 1 (first Story)
WOW another person who wants to see the next chapter :D yay
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: The Man in the Tower, Chapter 1 (first Story)
Thanks for the straight up answer, Thats what im looking for so thank you kind sir.
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: The Jesters Dance
WOW Thats was amazing Never throught i would read something like that Really good for a 13 year old Best i have seen yet I like how it has the ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Saved From the Fall
Okay, depending on your age how good this is,
Oct 1, 2013