Dragon99

There:D I'm not too good at paragraphs but hopefully that works

thanks:D I will do that:D

I know it sucks haha, but thanks for the review, those mistakes are really embarrassing. I'll fix them when I has time:D Also your 8 turned into a smiley face ...

Thanks Lav, I know its rough but if you read my description, I literally just thought up of an idea, and decided to just wing it before I lost the ...

well, and I know you probably hate sympathy, but I'm quite sorry to hear that. *hugs SecreteJournalist awkwardly*

and one more thing, judging from the tittle and description, and without getting too personal, is this something that had happened to you or something you made up?

In which case I think you should write those paragraphs in a first person POV from the candle because I thought it was the little girl thinking about the candle.

I love how you spun a new twist into the old story of Jesus being crucified. I enjoy hearing this from Jesus' perspective. I'm not even catholic! You should try ...

Yeah, I guess many of my poems are lyrical when I look back on it. I'll keep that in mind for next time thanks:)

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Anytime, friend:)

I was thinking that maybe, if the 'game' your talking about is metaphorical, I was thinking of a date. If it's literal maybe it means that she's a prostitute. Either ...