Drago101

Hello, I'd like to review your story. I thought it was interesting. It was a little boring, but interesting none the less. I thought it was well written. However, one ...

Hello, I'm Drago, and I will be attempting a review. First I would like to say, that your writing style is interesting. It was very narrative, and in the beginning ...

Hello, Drago here to review your story. When I saw this, I was thinking it would be another fallen angle story. It surprised me when I actually enjoyed reading it. ...

I really like the description in this story. Your characters are magnificently crafted into your story. I can't really see where the plot is going, but it is early in ...

Very nice story. Kaedee pointed out some of the only mistakes in the prologue. I noticed another mistake, though. Dobliv entered combat with the mysterious man. The man grabbed Dobliv’s ...

In the war stories forum we would say, "awesomesauce." Since I am not writing there I am forced to say more dull words that mean the same thing. The story ...

I think this needs some work. Sorry if it seems like I'm bashing it, but no plot is evident. It doesn't seem like you thought the story through. The description ...

Now that was a wonderful chapter. I absolutely love fantasy, and I can say if this was a book at a store I would buy it without a second thought. ...

Even with the edits I noticed some repetitive sentences. “Come on Sam,” shouted Simon as they ran away from the pursuing police car. The police car was gaining on Sam. ...