Dracula

Hey, MeatBunCat! It's me again. :) I know I've skipped ahead quite a lot but I think this is the last review I'll have time for, so I'll just go ...

Hey there, znale1! Happy Review Day! It was silent complete and utter silence. You require some extra punctuation here. I'd suggest a full stop after 'silent' and then start 'complete' ...

Hey there, Sillia! I'm here to review and shuffle this out of the Green Room. :D What if the life you knew...ceased to exist? Get rid of that ellipsis! It's ...

Hello there, charlottejoness! Happy almost end of Review Day!!! Right off the bat, I can see that your paragraphs are too long. It's a good idea to have middle-length or ...

Hello, Dest, and Happy almost-over Review Day!! Curi did in fact dream last night though it seemed mostly incomprehensible, and she couldn't remember any important details. She felt there were ...

Hey there, Aleta. Happy almost end of Review Day. :D Before I begin, I'll just point out something that catches my eye instantly. The 'sign here' with a comma after ...

Hello there, Naenaerom246, and Happy final hours of Review Day!! It is a wonder why people are scared of the dark or, more correctly, what's in the dark. Not the ...

Hey there, Zoom! Happy last few hours of Review Day! The roar of propellers came from afar, thundering across miles of dusky sky and desolate pastures before reaching the farm. ...

Hey there, MeatBunCat! Happy Review Day (or what's left of it)! :D “As cute a scene as this it,” Lore interrupts Ellie and me during out bonding moment. Rude. “What’s ...

Hey there, Hikarufire64, and happy almost-end-of Review Day! :D “We could cut the Rocks down to stubs with our Kinesis as we make our way down!” Rick said as he ...

Hey there, Fullmetal13. I review by typing down my thoughts as I go, hopefully that will help. :D If my life was a movie, then the next two months would ...

Hey there, plagueratbabe! Happy final hours of Review Day!! Middle of the night, tossing and turning, half of her covers were already on the floor, but no matter how hard ...

Alrighty, I'm here for the last chapter so far. Let's get these out of the Green Room, eh? :) The next day the sky was dark and grey. Not a ...

Aaaand, it's me again! The next morning Queen Silvia was up and was walking over to Sheeka’s room. The small serpent was awake and was looking out of her window. ...

Good morning, Tsunami! I'm back for some more reviews before Review Day ends. :D The next morning everyone was up bright and early. Queen Silvia was in the library reading ...