Note: This whole poem is based around Wilfred Owen's Dulce et Decorum est, so some of the lines are not mine. I've also used Mental Cases.
Bent double, like old
beggars under sacks, cursing as we trudged our way through the dirt. It was silent
complete and utter silence. It was peaceful chaos. We’ve been dragging down
this path for two days, since the sergeant passed from a bullet to the head.
The doors ended up being closed on us, as we drag our lifeless souls to our
home. Deep down we all knew there was no home… Not for us at least.
Clickety-Click.
Partially familiar faces desperately look to each other for help. A grenade?
Soldiers? The forces? Have they come ba-
“Gas! GAS! Quick,
boys! –“ A voice howled from the other end.
I was quick enough to
fumble my helmet on, in time… The poor simple soldier boy stumbled backwards
and forwards hopelessly. As the gas took over him, his icy eyes glared at me.
At the time he seemed to want me to share the same fate. His eyes poured out
agony, but a hint of happiness and hope. Hope that one day his country will
remember his name. How could his country remember his name when not even I know
his name? That Pope girl wrote those words, “Who’s for the Game?”, while she sat
on her ass at home. If she chants these torments, even though she goes home and
prays she’ll never know.
He wanted safety. He
wanted my safety. One I could not secure. He staggers inches away guttering,
choking, drowning.
“Wilfred” He calls me.
“Wilfred” He torments
me.
“Wilfred” He begs me.
“Wilfred” My vision was clear and I realised it was just
Nurse Patsy, waking me from another nightmare, “are you okay?”
“Yes I’m fabulous, fantastic actually.” The sarcasm became
quite evident at this point. I truly did feel apologetic for Nurse Patsy. Women
were never really people I’d gotten along with, especially after the war. What
can I say, I am one of those mental cases, who witnessed multitudinous murders,
whose lungs once loved laughter.
“That’s good to hear…” She was clearly hurt, but she managed
to keep up that teethy smile of hers, “I hope you have this attitude more
frequently, so we can have pleasant evening walks, which we have to go to right
now.”
I follow her without uttering another word. Words. What
would I do without it? I love them. In fact, I’ve started writing poems
whenever I have my meetups with Mr Sassoon. I have to admit it’s the only time
I can express myself with losing my temper. Sassoon had involuntarily joined
war as well, and we’re able to talk about all the joyful moments that came with
it. Our minds are corrupt with blood smeared, helpless images of the lifeless,
dying soldiers.
As we walk through the hospital hallways, I ponder why all
hospitals are white? I feel as though white represents hollowness, depression….
Death. To add to that the scent, even more terrifying. I can’t bare it. Maybe
that’s why I enjoy my evening walks so much.
When we step outside the fresh breeze seemed to embrace my
body. I felt in control. I didn’t feel like the man constantly awakening from
trauma.
The leaves seemed different today… Orange, almost red. The thought
of red sends shivers down my spine. Autumn is by far my least favourite season.
Why? It’s the last season for the leaves. Last minutes of their life they sway,
as the gas pushes them down.
“Aren’t these trees just colourful?” Nurse Patsy interrupts
my thoughts.
“How so?”
“Well they come in different shades of orange, yellow, re-“
she glances at me sideways, “it’s just beautiful.”
“I wish I could agree with you,” with that we continue walking
down what seemed like a painfully happy day.
I look around only noticing women and children walking here
and there. Jealousy seems to stab me in the back, as I throw disgusted looks
everywhere. How could they carry one when a family member if fighting their
asses out in hell.
These streets were once filled with laughter and liveliness...
and boys... Boys who’d once grinned at life in empty joy. Now, these women wander
these lifeless, barren streets.
“Would you like to have a seat Mr Owens?” Patsy directs me
to a bench. Not long after I’ve sat down, and slowly rest my eyelids… the
ground below me shakes. An earthquake? An Attack? An Attack? AN ATTACK! My eyes
snap open.
The scarring scenes engulf me with a warm welcome. The smell
of the dead hits me like a tsunami. I scurry under the closest tree, to find blood
dripping on to my forehead. I snap my head up to find him guttering, choking,
drowning. I’m deprived of my hearing when an ear piercing scream fill the
atmosphere.
“Owens” The voice is drowned out by the screaming. I sit
there, my knees pulled to my chest my head tucked between them as I shut my
ears.
It was not until later when I realised it was me shrieking.
It was not until later when the irritated faces of the women stare at me.
“Mr Owen!” Nurse Patsy screams. My muscles relax as I gather
myself up. I stand up, and observe my surroundings. Women were staring from
everywhere. Mothers hiding they’re children behind them, some using them as a
shield.
A mother walked up Nurse Patsy, “He should know how to
behave in public, and if he doesn’t he deserves to be locked up in that
hospital room of his. Why do you accommodate people like him? They can’t even
fight for this country without coming back with ‘injuries’. Stop acting weak
and get back on that war field” She says with a smirk, waiting for a heap of
people to applaud… but no one does. Right in the moment, the anger I felt was
indescribable. I could tell it wasn’t just me who was aggravated by her
comment.
“I served my country up to my heart’s content, and I didn’t
come back as the coward who ran away, as I’d imagine you would,” She scoffs at
my response, but I wasn’t finished, “If in some smothering dreams, you too
could pace behind a wagon that we flung him in, and watch the white eyes
writhing in his face. His face hanging, like the devil’s sick of sin. If you
could hear, at every jolt, the blood come gargling from his froth-corrupted
lungs. Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud of vile, incurable sores on
innocent tongues. My friend, you would not tell with such high zest to children
ardent for some desperate glory, the old lie: Dulce et Decorum est Pro patria
mori.”
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