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Re: The Sterling Knight
I love it when people use pictures, it's such a rare thing but really looks amazing. I personally would have resized the picture to make it a little smaller because ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: 1
Heya I'm here and reading your chapter. I found a few little nitpicks... The musketeer had presented the duellist to some of his colleague and they all seemed interested in ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 28
Did you know that Saved By The Bell is a song by the Bee Gees? Haha I just had to mention that. Anyway, I like your chapter. Although I haven't ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Blood Thistle Trilogy Book 1 Prologue
Oh my goodness, I love Scotland. Let's just say that I'm really going to enjoy reading this! :) You've got a great father-son relationship (it's ironic that I would say ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: My First Spoken Word Poem (To my Father)
I'm so sorry that you've gone through this. I can't begin to imagine what it might have been like. This poem just goes through it all and gets it out ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Someone in the back seat
Hello! I love myths. I'm not sure about urban ones but I guess I'll find out. ;) I'll start with the nitpicks first, and there really aren't many at all. ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 17
Hello! I've come to review, but there isn't much to say! I only have one nitpick... I'm not going to copy and paste the whole thing, but that very large ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue
I like your title, it sounds old-fashioned and fancy. Keep it like that. :) The name you chose for his daughter is so sweet. Is it Fae as in faeries? ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Not Just A Box Ch5
It's me again! I review one of your other chapters, because I love Doctor Who. I really don't like Supernatural, but that doesn't matter. :) It was really cool how ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Laugh, Shadow-Raven, Laugh.
Well that was creepy. What made it especially creepy was the tune you used. I don't even know what to say which would reach the word count for a review. ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 5-8
Chapter Five They sat down, and thought Langston didn’t sit right next to me... And though* Langston didn't... This chapter was hilarious. Jaime is quite a confident girl, that much ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 4
I'm back again. :P Please don't get sick of me. I'm loving your story so far, I can literally see this as a chick-flick movie on television. Good job with ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapters 2 & 3
Hey, I'm back! Chapter Two everyone was fussing about me by the time I got to lunch You should clarify what sort of fussing you mean. I know it's a ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: save the books!
Ahhhhhhh thes'e r "my" ThouGhts exxxactlee>! I literally have a bookshelf where I keep hundreds of books and I just keep collecting them because I want my children to have ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: California Girl: Chapter 1
Hello! I'm here to review, as requested. I know this already has heaps of reviews, but I figure that I should start from chapter one. Anyway, I'll start reading now. ...
Oct 6, 2014
