Dracula

Hello and weeeeelcome to the Young Writers Society! We're very glad to have you. :) I often have the same problem with editing, where blank lines don't appear on the ...

This is a great poem. I think we all wonder about what life really is and how you can 'win' at it. The truth is, there is no 'life' in ...

Heya! I'll just get through any nitpicks I find before I point out the good things. The following will just be grammar or spelling mistakes... I swear to you it ...

It was a sunny Sunday summer morning. This line is way too comical for your story. Sometimes I wonder about all the hours Steve puts in at the office. This ...

It's me again. :) Her son is called Roman and she thought the urn looked as if it was made by a Roman ? This isn't a coincidence, I hope. ...

Umm... what do I write when I have no nitpicks at all and I just want to move on to part two? It was perfect and amazing! At first I ...

Okay so long chapters do tend to put me off. Actually they always put me off unless someone personally requests a review. BUT as soon as I read Tonks and ...

Hello! Happy Christmas, I hope you have a heap of fun and get lots of presents. :) Okay. The first thing I noticed was the giant paragraphs. I used to ...

Wow. I never would have thought so much about black. It's my favourite colour, only because I think it's necessary to see all the beautiful colours in the universe. Stars ...

Hey! Review Day is almost over and I love your story so I thought I'd review it and get my team some more points. :) Handing me some ambrosia, she ...

Hello! Happy last few minutes of Review Day! This is a touching poem, it gives out a lot of emotions. I think a lot of mums try to care, but ...

Hello! This will be an extremely short review because I have no nitpicks about your poem. It's perfect how it is and I don't know how to make it any ...

Hello and Happy Review Day... well, happy last 30 minutes of Review Day! I always like it when people write poems that rhyme. Rhyming poems are my favourite because they ...

Hello! I'm here to review in the last, extremely intense hour of Review Day. :) The school gates had been opened, gulping back tears, I edged towards them. I think ...

Aww! You should keep posting poems just like this one, because it was fantastic! The topic is very clever. I have written fanfictions because I want these things to happen, ...