-
Re: Frost Lark News 6/11/17
Me again! in the past.Yesterday, Lack of spaces. Mayor Clayton is not dead. So the only problem I have with this is that if this were a real newspaper, the ...
Jun 11, 2017 -
Re: The Tempest
I suppose since it's already been handed in you might not be looking for reviews, but hey, I'm here anyway! :P Wow. Your syllables, rhythm and all that were spot ...
Jun 1, 2017 -
Re: Little Princess
Hey there! Short story month is almost over, so I thought I'd better read this before it ends. :) She looks young, less than 10 years old. A gentle breeze ...
Jun 1, 2017 -
Re: Gardens of Eden: Chapter 3: Part 1
Happy Review Day, RavenBlack! I'm going to type down my thoughts as I read this. :D “Next time, I won’t let you win!” Ivy vowed. I like your first sentence. ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: however magnificently concealed in aaaaaaaalllll the complacent distance of the refrigerator door
Hey there! I'm going to type down my thoughts as I read. If there are plots and all manner of secrets that travel only in certain circles on local and ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: My Phone Died.
Hey there! Here are my random thoughts as I read this which may be of help... :) It has no actual brain of its own, or a pumping heart, just ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Doctor Who: Children of Mephistopheles
Hey there, SubSubLibrarian! When I saw this was a Doctor Who fanfic, I had to read it! :D My reviewing style is a little different. I like to type down ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 4.2
Thanks for messaging me! It was dark, much darker than Mr Pondek’s office, with only a single bulb blinking above his head. I hope you don't mind me getting into ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 5/21/17
Here goes nothing... Now no one stands between the Bivoclar Lizards and complete control of Frost Lark's political body. So I'm expecting the next edition of Frost Lark to focus ...
May 22, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 4.1
Me again. :) If this was set in the 60s rather than the future, Steve would be a hippie. XD That had always made Steve sad. He knew he, as ...
May 18, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 3.5
Hey Biscuits! I don't really feel like reviewing, but I really want to read this. So hopefully you won't mind if I just enjoy the read and don't try to ...
May 18, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 3.4
As a result that meant nobody ever went there so at least. For some weird reason this reminded me of Chamber of Secrets and the girl's bathroom. :P Anyway, hello ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 5/7/17
The precise architecture and contemporary window designs of the time period surprises many, and we can all agree that destroying it would be a great injustice to the builder of ...
May 7, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 3.3
Well, what did you expect if you looked after the only room in the ship containing comprehensive records of every single crew member, right down to their dental records You're ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 3.2
Awesome-sauce! Here I am, then. :D He supposed of all the senior officers who’d been at the meeting he wasn’t the least well equipped to deal with the nanobots’ teeny-ness. ...
May 3, 2017
