Dracula

Hey! I'll attempt to review this, but I honestly don't have much to say because your poem is already amazing! In my opinion, nothing needs to be edited or reworded. ...

Hey, FerranWright! Dracula is here to review on behalf of the Earth Kingdom. Even though I'm actually a bloodbender, but you know... :P Welcome to environment club over the next ...

I like the title, it's what made me decide to read the chapter. :D I reckon it would be fine as your official title. First up, there are a few ...

Hello, prabhathmathew! Dracula is here to review on behalf of the Earth Kingdom. :D Some say that all men are born equal. Bam. Opening lines are so important, they make ...

Hello, buckis! Dracula, the earthbender, is here to review your poem. :D First of all, I'd like to say that I found the extra editing added another dimension to your ...

Hey Soulkana! Dracula, the earthbender (I mean... bloodbender) is here to review your writing. :D I woke with the feeling of nostalgia and an ache in my heart that I ...

Since you were kind enough to comment on my work, I'll comment on your poem. :) I've already read this, but I didn't know what to say. I still don't, ...

Heya, Bball! Happy Review Day! You've got a lovely poem here, and like you said, the meaning is very important and should be spread around. So many don't realise that ...

Hey! This is super long, I suggest that you split it up into three or four separate parts. That way you'll get a lot more reviews. Anyway, I'll have a ...

Hey, Fantasy! Happy Review Day! :D I like your style of writing, it's sort of 'fairy-tale' and flows nicely. I have just one thing to mention about it. There's a ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! This might be interesting... reviewing a review. I'll give it a go. Your language is really formal and detailed, I like it. The introduction (or ...

When the chapter begins, only four of the five senses are addressed. I think you should describe some more sounds, such as the monsters' 'rawrs', the campers' cries or the ...

Hey, wisegirl! It's review day so I'm back to read some more of your fanfic! I'm having trouble motivating myself to review, but I enjoy this story so here goes... ...

This. Was. Amazing. And. Beautiful. And. Comforting. I didn't find any errors in your writing, just a few grammar mistakes (which I won't mention because I'm sure someone else will. ...

Hey, ILoveBooks! My poetry reviews are never very long, but I'll try my best to help you out. :) I stare at the window, when you finally show. I smile ...