Dracula

"--and so then, my dad was just like, 'I'll do it!' And he rushed off to save the day!" Festus bragged. "So he was all like, BOOM! and exploded Gaea. ...

Hey, Sagitta! I'm here to review... obviously. :) This will be the one that gets me my next star, yay! And it probably won't be very long because it seems ...

It's me again. Happy Review Day!! Perhaps that was why the Organisation had originally contacted her. First off, it's great that you told us about her crazy organisation skills. Secondly, ...

Your. Illustrations. Are. So. Cool! I hardly ever see illustrations on YWS, and these one really help to tell the story. I love the zooming out technique you used as ...

Oh, is it a Batman fanfic then? I haven't watched it before. And I never would've guessed that it was Batman behind that mask. I like it how he made ...

When I first read the title, I thought, haha, she must be talking about Percy Jackson! Grasping for air Face clinging with soaked hair When she broke surface I gripped ...

Yay, you used a picture! People hardly ever use pictures, the bbcode must get sad. :P Your decsription at the beginning of the chapter was really good, the gases make ...

Hello again, MrMuddyPig! :) Your summary of why watching a football is better than playing is spot on. Plus, you can't get beat up by the other players. It was ...

Here I am to continue reading! I really loved your prologue, so I have high expectations. But I'm certain that you won't disappoint. :) Faihrah took aim as the stag ...

Hey, Jello! I'm interested to see what this is actually about, since you mentioned April Fools, I'm wondering if there will be some humour. But I suppose I have to ...

It's me again. :) Such Tracks as a name is really growing on me. At first I thought it was a bit weird, but that's what makes it awesome. It's ...

Alright-e-o, let's see if this five dollar deal was worth it! Oh, and before I even begin reading, let me say that you should ALWAYS continue! If you've got a ...

Hey, it's Dracula. I intend to review chapter 3 which is in the Green Room, but I thought I'd better at least read your prologue first. :) Your first paragraph ...

Hey, Fruit4You! Thanks for the fruit. :P I'll go straight to the nitpicks, because it's probably best to get the tedious stuff out of the way. I rapped my fingers ...

Hey, Cailey! I love flash fiction, so I'll definitely have a go at helping out. Equity Blue had not written a single word for her high school English class. High ...