Dracula

Hello, Shadow! Thanks for posting your writing! I'll address this right away, because it's the first thing I notice: the spaces after the speech marks. Maybe this is a problem ...

I'm wondering if this is the same village as seen in previous parts of the poem? It would be good to just mention that somewhere, or give us a hint ...

This is an extremely short review, because there is nothing wrong with this part at all that I can see! It was great to have the villager reading the scroll, ...

This part has lots of likes, so it must be amazing! I'll get straight to it. Ooooh! I thought this would just be a continuation of the poem, like the ...

Hey, felistia! I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, so this will be rather short, but I wanted to review the older parts of your poem before I head to ...

Hey, jessiebear! I'm not that great at reviewing poetry (or 'other' but it looks like poetry to me), but I'll still give it my best shot since you asked for ...

Woah, this is super short and super amazing! My only problem, which I will get out of the way right now, is that this could be put into the horror ...

Hello, ChocolateCello! Happy Review Day. :) In the first paragraph, I think you did an excellent job describing the scene, but at the same time not overlooking the fact that ...

Hey there, angrynoodles! :D POW! I love how you went straight into the action. There wasn't a long paragraph full of back stories and explanations, there wasn't a boring dialogue ...

Hello, Apples, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! Happy Christmas too. :D Anyway, straight to the review... "What am I'm going to do Luis"said Tony's "Two of my men ...

Hey, Theresa! I'm going to attempt to review this, but going by the title I think it's going to be something that's not meant to be edited. Am I right? ...

Hey, Phoebe! Happy Review Day. :) Your first paragraph was pretty well written. Action scenes are very hard to write, but your action scene sounded professional and it wasn't hard ...

Heya! I'll get straight to things you could improve, though there are not many. She found that Annabeth usually made hand movements when she talked. Just when her mother had ...

Oh wait. This is a Supernatural fanfiction, isn't it? Well I know nothing about it and don't care to learn, but I'll still give this a go. :) The rattle ...

Okay, finally I'm going to be up to date. You'll have to tag me in a comment when you post future chapters... please? :D Oh, Aleksander isn't from their camp? ...