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Haha this was AWESOME ! :D I loved it! Really funny and i liked the way you were so matter-factly with everything. Also i was very detailed which is something ...

Whooooa i absolutely loved this one! Haa i just love the emotions that you poured into this poem! SO maany people can realte to it! Just...wonderful! :) ANd once again, ...

I liked this poem. Sounds like something i would write. :) I also loved the rhymes you had in it but the rythm was a little off beat. Maybe you ...

Ohh This is tooooooo good! I love the turning point in the story too! Wasnt expecting that. Yep i like surprises u_u Keep rocking this story will ya? ;3 OH ...

Ayy Once again: awesome! Maan im addicted to this storry! I love the suspense here ;) Its reeally emotional! I just loved it! Oh yeah and its actually funny!! Haha ...

YEpp this was just as awesome as the first chapter! Very entertaining! :) But i must admit.....I got a little confused when you were talking about those girls who broke ...

Wow! I really loved this story! :) It really is emotional and the narrator actually opens up from the first. However, i think that you could have been a little ...

Like x 1000 !!!! :D usual ehh! :) Cant wait for chapter 12! :) Ayyy ally ! Cutting the chapter just when it was about to get juicy...hmpphh xD

I must admit something...I am TOTALLY confused here! Is it a really a joke or are they indirectly talking about what happened with jess?? Honestly i kinda got lost here! ...

Ahem...Well it was a good chapter (as usual) -__- Well i would like to say...(you might not agree here)...But dont you think that the "baby"s are a little tooo much? ...

OH OH OH !!!!! :O B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omggg amaziing man!! I loved it ! loved it toooo much even ! :) Loved the rhymes. Loved the way everything makes sense. ...

Yep. I would be lying if i told you i didnt like this poem...i LOVED IT ! :) Keep it up :)

Wellf 0well happy you continued ally :) you ARE a tireless writer!^^ So yahh as u know i liked the story =) But well I think it would be better ...

I liked this story! Beautiful ! :) I loved the plot and all. Please keep it up girrl ! =D I would really really have liked it to continue though ...

I just loved loved loved loved this work ! It was fantastically amazing ! ;) I love the metaphors you used in the poem..the way the mystery slowly unravels that ...