Doubt

I don't really have anything to comment, except that I think it's simplistically really good. It's said in such an innocent way that it sticks to your mind a lot ...

O Humanity These admirers, they admire These conspirers, they conspire I was reading this and thought, "Oh no... this won't work.. Admirers... admire..." but to my surprise it did. Saved ...

Nice, typical poem. That's a compliment by the way. However, it was a tad ordinary. But the good kind. Haha, I'm the King Of Contradiction... Anyhow, I think maybe the ...

Wow. Wow. Excellent. First off... I really liked the concept. Secondly; naming River was genius. It just let it flow that much better and really accentuates the character a lot, ...

I love the rhyme structure, but it seems as if you were forcing the rhymes. Please don't - it just butchers the beauty that you have here. I agree with ...

I once met a man who had the exact same idea as you for a story... naturally, I cut out his tongue and had special surgery performed on his brain ...

It sounds very 'generic' to me. No real uniqueness, no stand-out lines. Always i am here for you and will protect you if i can, Never will you be alone ...

I really like this, especially the first stanza. And then the others are cool cause you switch things around and get new perspectives. It sounds like a hard assignment, and ...

If I had it my way, you'd be my poem. I’d write you beneath bittersweet Willows, weeping for lost Seasons of ripening. And you would flow from my pen Like ...

It was your first birthday, I gave you some skates, and I couldnt wait - for you to use them. Please dont touch the blade Please dont touch the blade ...

Gone are the days when we ran along the creek chasing minnows, and turning over countless rocks in the search for crayfish. Gone is the age when paradise was a ...

To call you, Just to say sorry. Forgive me, In return for a smile. Maybe you can hug me, Or give a kiss. I wouldn’t mind. Stay friends? I wouldn’t ...

Who can make her feel like the most beautiful girl in the room? That's what he's proud of. What deep pools of brown entice her everytime? Only his eyes. Whose ...

Sometimes the things in my head prevent me from getting out of bed, All I want to do is move my feet to the cold spots on my sheets, That ...

i wish you would confide in me all your secrets i wish you would hold me like there was no tomorow i wish that we could share sweet kisses and ...