Him

by Ladyequine91

  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

Published January 25, 2006

Who can make her feel like the most beautiful girl in the room?
That's what he's proud of.
What deep pools of brown entice her everytime?
Only his eyes.
Whose every touch and hug forbid her from sleeping everynight?
he knows...who doesn't?
How can just one look from him make her knees go all woobly?
he uses it like an artform.
How could one, single, kiss, send her into a whirlwind of emotions, that no one understands?
He understands, he always does.
What kind of girl would give her heart blindly to such an extraordinary man, when she knows he is just out to break her heart?
I know...

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antigone
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antigone commented Comment · Jan 28, 2006

I like it. Especiallly the ending was brilliant. Like Doubt said, the questioning is very nice.

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Doubt wrote a review Review · Jan 28, 2006

Ladyequine91 wrote:Who can make her feel like the most beautiful girl in the room?
That's what he's proud of.
What deep pools of brown entice her everytime?
Only his eyes.
Whose every touch and hug forbid her from sleeping everynight?
he knows...who doesn't?
How can just one look from him make her knees go all woobly?
he uses it like an artform.
How could one, single, kiss, send her into a whirlwind of emotions, that no one understands?
He understands, he always does.
What kind of girl would give her heart blindly to such an extraordinary man, when she knows he is just out to break her heart?
I know...


I liked it. And again, I liked your questioning ideas. Although I'd like to see some more of your poems that venture past the 'questioning'. :thumb:



I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
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