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  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The Romance of the Reaper

    Thanks for the honest review! Could you please tell me how to correct the spacing? It has takin a hold of the steering wheel and is currently driving me to ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Zero Hour

    Well, I'm flattered that you think so highly of this piece. Thanks for such a positive review! Out of everything I have ever written, this piece was definitely one of ...

    Jun 9, 2016
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Zero Hour

    Thanks for this honest review, Savvy! I'm glad that you both pointed out what you liked and what you think I should be careful with. Yeah. I've been aware of ...

    Jun 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: What am I?

    Interesting, the entire time I was reading this, I was certain this was about God or some other divine entity, but I laughed when I realized how wrong I was! ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Test #2

    Beautiful. XD

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Quod Statera De Coelum Et Infernum (The Balance of Heaven and Hell in Latin)

    Hey GrapeNerd, thank you so much for the honest review. I will admit that I am not the best with flow, but this particular poem was written to the beat ...

    Jun 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Hanging By A Thread

    I can most definitely relate with what you have written here. School can be pretty annoying at times, what with the many restrictions it adds to our lives, and its ...

    Jun 6, 2016


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman