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I don't think what you want In this poem Is very clear to you.There are some really good lines scattered throughout.But the self-pity and self-loathing Is expressed so bluntly that ...

We have always utilised our Imaginations to escape the clutches of the limitations of reality.This poem perfectly encapsulates the said sentiment.Its wistful and poigant and there Is such a sense ...

Funny It Is despite the humor there.I mean It's self-deprecating but In a good way.Its tinged with a healthy amount of Insanity after all.I love Insanity ! Honesty though,It adds ...

I am curious.Are you naming the characters with any particular objective In mind.Any nationality ? What's the kind of story you are looking to write ? Names carry a lot ...

It's very evocative.A poem has achieved true excellence when the verses,alongside being eloquent,also manages to convey a story.The tree's life,despite the simplicity of Its purpose or perhaps because

Oh,for heaven's sake this is brilliant.Brimming with such depth of feeling.Its sad,it's heart-wrenching but it's so wonderfully, magnificently profound."I am not modern depressed.I am classical suffer

Very good.Quite the focus less on power stats and more on storytelling though.Create drama and don't just narrate.Forgive me saying so but the characters are a bit one-dimensional.Seek other perspecti

There's a furious yearning in the poem,despite the resigned acceptance.You are an intelligent writer,and your poem this is not merely an expression of your feelings but an introspection of them.The ...

An exquisite piece.The third last para especially.Gets the blood pumping.The conviction of the last line strikes a chord that is very conclusive for the overall vibe of the story.His social ...

It's very heart touching.Particulary the refrain,"I miss you,Lucas" and the emphasis on the repeated mention of his name.The wistful quality in the poem really elevates this the narrator a bit ...

Polish could be very good.The idea is unique and there's a twisted edge to it that can be really very fascinating if properly executed.The whole poem's message is a little ...

'A Storm' is beautiful.For a subject so profound,it is strangely not excessively loquacious.The uncertainty, the elusive coalescion of the spirit is beautifully potrayed.You are a master in your craft

The prose is quite beautiful.The grief,pain and the sheer undated anger of Poltianak ! Brilliant.Your story does not dive into cliches even if there were placed could have.The horror,the disbelief ...