Dibidub

Hello! It was a pleasure to read this. The imagery presented paints a very clear picture of what is happening in this chapter. I rather enjoyed the lore in Adonai's ...

Hello! I liked how you clearly detailed Benjamin's inner monologue and emotions within this piece. I could practically feel Benjamin's distress and confusion over Ruby's dilemma. You also made Ruby's ...

Hello, this was a pleasure to read! I enjoyed the setting in the first half of your piece. It was filled with descriptions that provided a wonderful image in my ...

Hello! Your piece was a pleasure to read. I like how you portrayed the bad side of parents not approving of their homosexual children, and I enjoyed how Timothy was ...

Hello! I like how the tone of this piece was gloomy and sad, and it seems that the character the narrator is referring to lives in a bad home where ...

I enjoyed this story! I noticed that you were missing a few words in some of your sentences, such as "Was the purple-haired [girl] serious?" and "I thought you were ...

Hey I'm new here so I'll just start at the beginning. I really enjoyed the tone of voice you used throughout this whole chapter. I also loved the snarky comments, ...