Dhendon

Awesome, thanks! Glad to know its interesting even if you haven't followed it from the beginning.

Always challenging to spot my own grammatical errors and minor fixes. Thanks! I'll look back at this when it comes revision time for this chapter!

Darn... every time I do a revision, I try to fix tense problems and always keep more. I am trying to keep present tense, but that gets challenging at times ...

Wow! Super thanks! I actually had this revised recently and added better details and more descriptions. I also had a major revamp of his consciousness and added the tree part ...

Oops... Didn't mean to submit this one... Sorry...

Thank you! I realize my tenses are weird, and I will definitely fix that when I go back for editing. Glad you like it!

Yeah, I originally had this in third person, but I ended up changing it. I keep going back through and finding tense problems I didn't fix, so I'll go through ...

Very good point about the love aspect. I'll look to changing that around a bit. Thanks!

This is a wonderful poem, and I loved it. Generally, I'm not a poetry person, but this had a passion that I couldn't avoid. I enjoyed how it was written, ...