- Re: Chapter Eleven of The Lost Legend - The First Relic. Apr 23, 2013
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Re: Chapter Seventeen of The Lost Legend - Death Chaser.
Your work is Great. I love the plot and the characters. But could use some more details and explain how the character actually feels. I'll look forward to your next ...
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: Randsomed Chapter 1.2
Great chapter, great sudden appearance of the other guy, Rosa seems to care for rek, definitely can see the couple already.
Apr 18, 2013 -
Re: Weapons of Defense
I know there are some spelling errors so just to let you know...
Apr 17, 2013 -
Re: Ransomed Chapter 1.1
Damn, thats all I can say, probably the best piece I've seen on this website
Apr 17, 2013 -
Re: Unleashed:Awakened part six of a book
Awesome, but needs work on the bad guy's voice, and details on how the new girl looks, love her personality though, reminds me of a friend of mine. :D
Apr 17, 2013 -
Re: Unleashed:Awakened part 5 of book, now finished!
This is really it? The end of a wonderful story? It's good though, just keep writing and don't give up. I'm rooting for you!
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: Unleashed:Awakened fourth part of unfinished book
Pretty good, but you still need to include details on what the school looks like, what the classroom looks like, and if you could, slow it down just a little ...
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: Never Look Back
Jeeze, you seriously only wrote this from the top of your head!? A genius is amidst us all...
Apr 9, 2013 -
Re: lost in hometown wonderland
Many details, a little over the top actually, but overall a great intro
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Give Love a Chance~ part one
Good intro! Has great "voice" in it.
Apr 4, 2013