DevanEWilliams

Hello there, Sorry it took so long, but here I am with the review. I don't review novels much, so sorry if it isn't too helpful. I'll try my best ...

Hey there! I think what you have has quite a bit of potential. I'm not exactly sure where it's going to go, since not much has happened yet, but that's ...

Hello there! Since you reviewed my piece, I decided to return the favor. :D If you go into the forest, just far enough so that you begin to wonder if ...

Hello there! I have never reviewed a novel before, so I apologize if it is weird or lame or something. :) Since this chapter is all we have so far, ...

Hello! I'm just going to review this, if you don't mind ;) Overall, I think several aspects of your story went extremely well-you established the setting right away, and your ...

Hello there! I think the emotion that you put into this poem is very real, and I can tell you really put your heart into it. Wonderful job! Your imagery ...

Hello there! This poem was very interesting and emotional. The details you use when describing the events really contributes to the reality of the piece. Aside from that, there were ...

Hey there! Your story is great, and very emotional, which is what you were aiming at, so good job on that part! Unfortunately, I feel like I was missing some ...

Hello there! Great poem. The way you incorporated the song lyrics in fit it perfectly. They really went with what you were trying to say. One thing that I may ...

Hey there! I think this piece was really emotional, and the interesting point of view it's in makes it more real. I think the Spanish you have in there makes ...

Hello there! I know you said this wasn't finished yet, but I still want to comment on what you have written so far. I love your entirely different perspective you ...

I absolutely love this poem. Your metaphor for what you are struggling with makes perfect sense, and can really be taken several different ways. Two paths along the beach. Your ...

Hello there! I love how light-sounding this story is, especially at the end. You would expect the tensest part of the story to be serious, but you kept the tone ...

Hey there. I really enjoyed reading this, and so I decided to review it. These types of stories have always been really interesting to me. Yours was creative and insightful. ...

Hello there! First off, I just want to say that I think this would be a lot more pleasant to read if you separated each set of two lines into ...