DevanEWilliams

Hello there! I have to apologize for making you wait so long! I've had quite a lot of stuff going on lately. I actually did read the story a while ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested! Sorry it took so long to get back to you. Wow, this is quite the lengthy piece here. I might even suggest dividing ...

Hi there! I'm going to review your poem if you don't mind! ;) I'll start by inserting my personal critiques into each individual part of the poem, and then I'll ...

Hai Blues!

Hello! I'm here to review this as you requested. I think I'll start out with the individual critiques and then I'll give you my overall opinion of your poem. Let ...

Hey, there! I'm just going to review this, if ya don't mind ;) So, for the first impression. The title. I just so happened to have read the book The ...

I have to say, this got my attention quite nicely, because...for anyone that knows me at all, they would know that I am completely obsessed with ballroom dancing. It is ...

Wow, this really surprised me. Okay, I actually really loved this, and let me tell you why. I read the first stanza and though, "Oh dear, this is just going ...

Hi there, here to review this poem for you. After reading and reviewing another poem of yours, I can recognize the similar style of the other, even though they’re quite ...

Hello there, I’m here to review your poem. First off, I wanted to say that I really liked this. It’s so unique, and you used your words and punctuation very ...

Hey, I noticed that this didn't have any reviews, so I'd like to go ahead and review this for you. So, as an overview, I'd like to say that this ...

Hello there Mesh! Just stopping by for a review ^^ I loved this poem. I really loved the message that you get from it, and even though the theme itself ...

Hello there, just stopping by for a review. :D This is a very good start so far. I just want to say that I am definitely looking forward to seeing ...

Hi there! So, I think what you have here so far is good. You've got a fairly straightforward plot (at least, as much plot as you can have with a ...

Hello there! This was a very interesting story, for several reasons. First, you have a very good idea of how your main character responds emotionally and physically to the situations ...