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Re: Where were you on 9/11?
I was at home, mm had just made me lunch, I live miles away from America, I live in Europe, and I still feel heartbroken about 9/11, I was not ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (3)
Hey!! This Chapter is really really good! I like the way it starts off by describing everything bit by bit. also the descriptions are perfect, I couldn't have gotten a ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2.1)
This makes so much sense it's unbelievable. I love how you go with the cliche that the quarterback of the school is a complete jerk, but then you add a ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Courting Insanity (1)
Hey Ishizzle! I really like this novel! Never knew Jude was so deep or how much he cared about his friends! You make this Marcello guy seem like the bad ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: On the Wind
LOVE IT!!!!!! You're so awesome! I like the theme of time also: black and gold, That reminds me of a song that was on the new version of Fame, I ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Xenophobia
Hey 567! The poem is really really good! It sounds kind of like a song! Just one question though In utero for too long What's utero? Is it like some ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Just Trying...
This poem seems so realistic! It feels like you've actually been through that! I love realistic poems! You've done a really good job in this one! I know what it's ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Canoe Tritina
Hi there! This is a really good poem, I love how you compare the droplets of water to glitter and the nature to magic. It shows how beautiful nature truly ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Ted, His Friends, and the Evil Rain Master
wow...just...WOW! Someone dieing from Geometry...WHY THE HECK DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?? :D Also, Rainbow ninjas, truly epic! Honestly I don't know what you were thinking when you wrote this, ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: The Chronicles of Bob
I just saw "The Chronicles of Bob" on the featured list and instantly went "This should be a good one :D" and...I WAS RIGHT! Haha, yeah, it's a good story! ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Scary, yet amazing! I love it! Not for what happens in the story, but for the depth an emotion of it all. Not to mention the reality. More often than ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Break that Fall {Chapter4}*edited*
I am truly in love with the story, I came on my computer to write my Affairs of the Heart story and you've got me here procrastinating! Dang you and ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Break that fall {Chapter 3} *edited*
DRAMA! OMG I loved this chapter, made me lol xD! anyway I did notice one teeny mistake: and would she please forgive her ? Umm...forgive him ?...methinks :P don't beat ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Letters *Edited*
EMALY!!!! I. Love. This. Seriously, most of the stuff here I can totally relate to! I have no criticism! I just love love L.O.V.E. this whole thing, seriously! It's like ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Day
Nice poem. Though I didn't quite understand it, is the narrator happier alone in his own world? That would make sense, I don't know, I'm not that good at poetry, ...
May 29, 2011
