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A knock on the door startled Meline. '' Who's there?'' She asked. ''Cardinal's Guard!'' The figure replied. You need to make a separate line whenever someone's talking. I got confused ...

“A summer one, and now we are nearly (at) winter because you took so long to evaluate possibilities, and everyone is looking towards you for fashion ideas with Ranya and ...

Anam levitated from the roof to the in front of the library. They didn’t have to accompany their brother, but the place at which they was provided them a view ...

Aw, I like this a lot. If you intended to leave the reader with an optimistic, heartwarming feeling you succeeded with me at least. My only nitpick: You begin to ...

It was quiet. This quietness was strange. And it was not only the quiet; it was the stillness of everything. The apartment was clean and of minimalistic design, nothing was ...

You call me to you, My heart beats with your crashing waves, we are one, Everyday you call. Wow, I like this a lot. It reminds me of a siren's ...

There was once a girl from our village who was very beautiful. It was said that at her birth, the whole world stopped for a moment in awe of her ...

First, you need to use paragraphs and create a space after a character speaks. You could also try combining your sentences with some conjunctions to stop choppy sentences. There are ...

Wow! I like this piece a lot with its constant questioning tone. Something I don't see is making me too shy I'm not too sure what this was supposed to ...

‘Come to the stage’ The Magician began to shout. As she moved through the crowd, With shivering limbs, The audience knew the show was really about to begin. This was ...

Complacent, quiet and withdrawn, she went to school every day, regarded it as a monotone procedure one simply had to do and did not object. Her grades were usually high, ...

Okay, first... To Cameron, getting caught in a storm was like of falling in love. Storms were exhilarating and hoarded every inch of her attention and energy. It could be ...