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Derek

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1: Don't Say A Word

    Sorry I'm just getting around to replying! Finishing up my semester and all. Thanks for your awesome review. I'll definitely work on fixing the things you mentioned in the future ...

    Dec 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1: Don't Say A Word

    Thanks for the review! I always LOVE grammar fixes (and that's not sarcasm) so feel free to come back for more in future installations :p. Grammar is one of my ...

    Dec 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: For Those Who Fall In Love Easy

    Just did an edit on it!(after all your wonderful suggestions). Hope you like the revised.

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ultamite Chapter 7: Good, Bad, or C.O.R.E?

    I'm sorry if I confused anyone! It was meant to go; Vlora helps Riley after stabbing himself(see last chapter last two paragraphs), Vlora and Riley encounter woman who becomes possessed, ...

    Jul 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chapter 2: His Secret

    Yikes thank you Ranger! I swear I fixed some of those though when I reread it... But all is well and those mistakes have been fixed :].

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chapter 1: Just The Beginning

    Thank you everyone for your reviews! I've edited it so every review above this comment has been fixed :]. Thanks again.

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Looking Glass

    Does that mean that the love is still living? Its a good poem though.:) The meaning is really that the love never existed at all :]. The Looking Glass could ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nighttide Chapter 1 Bad Decisions

    Thank you all for your reviews! I have noticed a lot, and I mean it when I say a lot of grammar errors! I'm surprised that I even managed to ...

    Nov 8, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nighttide Chapter 1 Bad Decisions

    Wow maegardens. All those were completely by accident and typos. Yikes. Bad ones too. Thanks!

    Nov 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nighttide Chapter 3: The Beginning

    Well, those I would consider optional questions. Things that in the moment doesn't need to be revealed in order to understand what is going on. All those will be explained ...

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Nameless Poem

    Well, when I wrote it the beginning was very easy to write. I got to end and it got complicated. I had actually written it without "single" there before. I ...

    Aug 2, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter

    I didn't like it ._. Made fun of Twilight way too much which was the initial point I suppose. Stop hating on Twilight x.x, They should be compared cause they're ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 3-The Disease

    Thanks for your review. In that paragraph it's from 1 person's point of view. Her enemy is unknown to you, so she is the one firing the barrage of bullets. ...

    Sep 19, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: My Greates Song Yet!

    Wow this is a really good song! I think the chorus is repeated too many times, maybe another verse, or two would make it better. The chorus and rhyme is ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 2-The City

    It's not a fan-fiction? I didn't steal the movie title. First off it's nothing like the movie :/ Second there is no book called Disturbia so legally i can publish ...

    Jul 11, 2008


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