Demoness

Haha, don't worry! I did see the beauty in this piece and your symbolism is quite extra-ordinary. With imagery I sort of mean symbolism.. I mean you describe things very ...

Hellu, Je suis le demon du Ess! Néeh, Hi! I like this poem, great rythm and flow and you truly have some great imagery and descriptions going for you! To ...

I thought I rated it 16... but it was 18... when it should've been 12.. Messed up stuff. :P

Aoow, what a sweet story! I've got a little brother who is five and you managed to capture both the frustation they can cause you to feel along with the ...

Haha, thing is this is a song I wrote and the repetition is there because it's the refrain :) I'm aware it's a bit dull and not my greatest work ...

Thankyou so much for the reviews. DigiDestined18 - Her cloths made her sink but he did too... but the rest of your questions is what I plan to relief in ...

Thank you very much for the review. :) It was really helpful actually xD

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Thank you so much for the great review. I know the rhymes are forced at times... I just get so mad when I get this great first line and then ...

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As alwyas... I'm speechless. You're my number one favorit poet... Still I hate you for writing such amazing stuff, it makes mine look like trash xDD But, thankyouuu for letting ...

Oh, thankyou guys for the great reviews. I can see now that this piece is full of errors, the rhyming do sound forced at many places... I wrote this awhile ...

Aah, this one was a long one! But it was really good, and though it started as one of those "doomed to die" poems you managed to sneak in a ...

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