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Re: The Eagle and I
So this was a beautifully, well-written poem! The flow was a bit choppy at times but not something to dwell over too much since it went on well for the ...
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Re: My First Date... (A Contest Entry)
Soo, Hi, I'm Demoness and I was intentially going to review this for you but I ended up just admiring it for it's beauty! Woww! I've never read anything like ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: The Tree Dweller
So, I've read this a couple of times now and decided over again that it's too massive for me to review... Yet I'll give it a try. The reason I ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Helloue! This is a very strong poem emotionally - it brings up a sore subject and I think you've done a great job expressing the hurt one must feel being ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: The Way You Say My Name.
This is a really sweet and beautiful poem and I love your rhymes and the way you built up this text! I just had a problem with the first two ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Stonger Than Love
Heyy, VERY impressive to manage with that rhymescheme and still manage not to make any of them sound forced! The piece flowed on well and I liked the rythm too.. ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Beyond Looks
So I thought this was very good for someone who's doesn't consider themselves a poet! I like the structure and how every last line in each stanza rhymes with eachother, ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Written In This Skin
Okay so.. I was gonna review this but then I read MMM:s review and well... I also read you poem and you're writings are just so much deeper and advanced ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Memoria In Aeterna
Hellue! I'm Demoness, and here comes my review! Eh, so - I like the story you're telling here and like Meg said, it makes you think, which is good. You ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Not Yet
Helluee! This was a quite delightful thing to read, it was vivid, full of descriptions and it also flowed well... yet, I've got one thing to point out. Mainly, it's ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Waves of Fire
Hello, This is the Demoness speaking! I've come to review this piece! So.. I like this idea - with only three words per line and for the better part of ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: The beginning of the end contest entry.
Hellue, IcyFlame! I haven't given up reviewing just yet, so hope this will come to help! ;D “Thoughts are very dangerous things,” declared Mrs Gumridge importantly, stroking her broomstick fondly.
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: The Meaning
Hello, I'm Demoness and I've come to give you a review of this work! What is my true purpise of life ? - I believe you mean "Purpose" And what ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Needless
How can I resist reviewing a piece with a title that overpowering ^^ Well, well, here I go. Baah, I don't know where to begin. I like the emotion and ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: The Walk Alone
This is an interesting though. I think we all feel like we just wanna be cut off from the world sometimes, so that we can think over the lives we ...
Aug 10, 2011
