Demoness

I've read many pieces with a theme much similar to this lately but this poem is still very original. I love you style and you've written this in such an ...

Hellåå! This was really quite wonderful to read! It flowed so very well, it was short but powerful and yet it created vivid pictures! I liked it, and I liked ...

Hahaaa! I love Monty Phyton and it can't be an easy thing to rise to his delusional level of comedy and craziness but I think you managed pretty well ^^ ...

Aow, I loved this! Hermoine and Draco... that's something new! I like that you based this on an idea of your own but still managed to capture the true personalities ...

I like this. It's quick but yet manage to say alot. It's sad, yet hopeful. It wouldn't have hurt to see some more cretaivity and imagery in this but for ...

I love how this is so short and yet very vivid and full of imagery! You're really talanted and I have no complains when it comes to neither structure or ...

Djiii! This has got so much power and emotion in it! I like how you express all the hatred she feels and has felt all through the piece and count ...

Neey, this is so SAD, yet it isn't because it so beautiful! I was too caught up in the story to be able to detect any grammatic errors and really.. ...

This is a really cool poem! The first stanza is so vivid and I absolutely adore your creativity! I couldn't find anything wrong with the structure, you've built great stanzas! ...

This is such an amazing piece! The idea of portraying the greed of men through the eyes of a Lion, the king of the jungle, is just brilliant. I like ...

Haha! This was hilarious, intruging, scary and beautiful all at once! The beginning was really good, and I like how the story took such an unexpected twist. I wish we ...

Iiih, I really, really liked this piece. So powerful. I enjoyed the switch between the stanzas that played out in the present and the more formal ones in italics. They ...

Hey, This is quite amazing! I think almost any writer can relate to this and it makes it very personal to read. The words and questions seems to be directed ...

Hello Jenna! I think you have a great start here, you're a very creative writer, using loads of amazing imagery and making your piece vivid. I agree with previous speakers ...

Okay so this was quite simple and plain and that's not always a bad thing but here I think it's a bit too plain. You know, there are beautiful words ...