Demeter

Hmm... I think I meant something that would completely stun me, like "Wow!". I've heard the story of the ice queen and knew what it's about when I went to ...

You're very welcome. ;) And yeah, I know, it's difficult, I can't do that, either. :( Wow a lot commas in one sentence :) Why do I have to finish ...

Woah, thanks for your great reviews! :)

Thanks for your comments - yes, I know the translation's rather poor and you don't really get the idea of it if you don't know Finnish. I actually don't know ...

Hey, I noticed you changed the title! I like it better now :) Wish you luck!

Ok, great :) Beautiful story.

Alright then. :) I think the lily is someone who's been forced to feel inferior. No one has respected her (I say her, though of course it could also be ...

I don't really know, it just came into my mind. Maybe that was a little too rash thing to say. But don't worry, it didn't disturb me for the poem ...

I agree with Vernon in some parts, but I really liked the idea of this. It wasn't too short nor too long, either. :) I, too, will smile to him.

I agree with Tamara, you should make clear lines. leafs --> leaves will never happened --> will never happen And don't forget to review! Other than that, nice job. Let's ...

I don't think that straight reference to Harry Potter is really necessary. But other than that, I think you use words that are very suitable for this kind of poem. ...

Such a sweet, little, simple poem. I really liked this. And although it's simple, it has no vain words in it.

Very expressive, but it had a bit gloomy vibes. I like the way you use words, kind of tying them together, if you know what I mean. Keep on. :)