Demeter

Hello! This is rather a nice poem, I think. It didn't blow me away, but it was ok. Those words are fantastic when nice After "fantastic", which is an overwhelming ...

I hope you don't really think that way. Your writing's very good. My doubtful mind is a dry well. What a good way to start a poem! At least I ...

Hello! I liked that there were words connecting the title's "princess". For example, throne, knight and sword. A sword of thoughts crash through her brain Driving her restless mind absolutely ...

This kind of writings are definitely my cup of tea. But I wouldn't call this an essay, either. Maybe... a column? At least that's what I like to call my ...

Hello! I have to admit that I laughed when I was reading this. And it's a good thing. The story itself wasn't something to laugh at, but it was so ...

Hello! Emilie had long chestnut brown hair, beautiful green eyes and sharp cheekbones. In fact, it was her eyes that had caught his attention the first time they met. Today ...

You're pretty clever, did you know? Dedicating this to us writers. Being so enthusiastic about the idea, we don't really spot any mistakes. Haha. But I liked it, though. We ...

Hello! You make me want to hold you, on the beach, watching the sun's ray. The last line is too long, it breaks the rhythm. Also, I think "watching the ...

Hello! Hmm... the structure is a little random. They are no clear lines or stanzas (of course, there doesn't always have to be), and there's no punctuation whatsoever. I can ...

Hey, E. First of all, I'm really very sorry for you, for what you have had to go through. But I'm glad that you could turn your feelings into something ...

Aw, that was sad! And well written, I have to say. But I love British boys and the accent, too, like Casey ;) He was an exchange student, I reckon? ...

How come you're "not a writer"? I liked this story, even though I'm still wondering what was the point of it ;) Oh well, that's just me – I don't ...

Hey, Monki! Here I am! And it really doesn't make me feel better either. A comma after "better". Mom's never been a fan of speaking with her 'inside voice'. "Ow," ...

So this isn't the end yet? Alainna! What's keeping you? ;) We really need to talk face to face Is it just me, or is Tom constantly saying this? Okay, ...

The detail about Lyla's name is interesting. I still have a feeling that this can't be the end, but maybe it isn't? I know there's one chapter left, is it ...