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Demeter

Demeter

  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Forest

    Hi, Anna! I don't think we have been introduced? ;) Well, I'm Demeter, and it's nice to meet you! Would it work this time? Would they be there? (Questions are ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Exile: Chapter 1

    Moi! Täällä ollaan koska sanoit kerran että sun tarinat on tyhjiä kuin Springfieldin kirjasto :D Exile This is the story of one maybe 'a'? man's journey, a journey filled with ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Lights Begin To Twinkle (revised)

    Hi there! Here I am, as you requested. Rhubarb Face was the moniker Felix had created for the ancient Mr. Woodward, whose cheeks were permanently a deep pink, and taught ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Marionette

    Hello, Laramie! My head lolls on my chest like death, 'Lolls' and 'death' seem to clash with each other too harshly, reconsider word choice I’m somewhere else- someplace syrupy and ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deepest's Tale Part i

    Hey, Stellz! I hope you don't mind me digging this up, because this is kind of old and I don't know you're working on this anymore. I just wanted to ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    Hello, Rosey! OverEasy basically said it. This is an old story that we all have read before, and your way of telling it isn't very unique, either. The subject is ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Burnt Sausages

    Woah, Blink – This was very effective. I'm actually rather speechless, which is a good sign ;) You should definitely take a chance on submitting this for the Journal. There ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Totally Lunar (I'm a sucker for werewolves.)

    Hiya there! Here as you requested ;) The sun was starting to rise as I shuddered awake with a massive headache that violently shook my brain. I think this is ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Hanna's Holocaust ; Part One

    Hello, Emily (I believe I can call you that? :)) Today Momma told me I could go outside to play ball with my brother and my baby sister, Evette. Since ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [deleted]

    Hiya, Sarah, again. And sorry, I’ve realized that there is a world outside these four walled rooms. Worlds of sweets, of love, of happiness, and Helen intends to meet it ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [deleted]

    Hi, Sarah. I decided I wanted to read some of your work, since I feel so guilty about not doing it for a while ;) And the title caught my ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Stepping Into Static - chapter 3

    Hey again, Niccy! Here I am :) ELLEN I could tell Kassie had begun familiarising herself with Michael again, but I could see it in her eyes that she was ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Live

    Hiya, Ten! Welcome to YWS! I'm Demeter, and I shalt be thy reviewer today. From now on, could you please do at least two reviews before you post any more ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: OH Finland

    Oh, lordgluzman! Guess where I'm from? ;) The place where when is snows the whole country with songs and happiness thunders Where when is? What does that mean? The place ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The End

    Well, congrats, Jared! Another one finished! I hope it doesn't matter, but I'm quoting the whole thing, because it's easier for me to make notes that way. :) end [end] ...

    Dec 31, 2008


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