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Demeter

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

    Hi, KL! Here I am :) He lies. He is made of lies. He is made of lies, and nothing more. He lives to tell me lies. Lies that, through ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rainbow Child

    Hey, Jon. I saw this had no reviews so I wanted to give it a try. I had a glimpse of life today, And now I am the one, the ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: butterface

    Blinksey. Last time I reviewed something by you was... ? A poem? Some time ago? Anyway, when I saw this, I [s]screamed boobo and ran[/s] decided to come in. And, ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Missing

    Ali! It's me, Demi =D Let's see what you've got here! Nitpicks The papers that had rattled free from the notice board on the wall fluttered all around me, and ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Time Dissolves Itself - Preface

    Heya Ashley! So, I promised you I would take a look at this, and here I am! =D The mountain air teased Anna’s hair into tangles as her eyes rested ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sol Invictus on Trial

    So, Gal. I was here last night, and wrote the review, and was about to click "submit", and then my connection died. It certainly wasn't the highlight of my life ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pretty Polly

    Hi, Kylan. I'm ashamed to admit I haven't read that many things by you. I think I really should, if they're all like this. :P “Oh Polly, Pretty Polly, your ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Butterfly Memories

    Hey Pen! Like I said, this is my 400th review – so remember to feel special, eh? :P Memories float in the air, Like butterflies with golden wings, Fluttering above ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Why is this happening to me?

    Hey Anshita – I saw this had no reviews yet, so I decided to look at it. :) So, it starts out with the chorus part, doesn't it? The whole ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Angel

    Hi there, Shylanott. I know you posted this weeks ago, but since this had no reviews, I kind of wanted to give it a try. ;) “I don’t know yet. ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In the Boxes Under the Bed

    Hi there, Weare! you captured All then it faded, twisted. black, gray, bits of blue there's yellow too. I sort of like the capitalized "All" it makes it more intriguing ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Beauty is a Beast

    Hey, Lizzie! Well, I must say I'm an absolute sucker for rhyming poetry, since I can't do it myself that well, and I think you pulled it off. There were ...

    Jul 13, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Summer's Renewal

    Hi, Piepie! I saw this had no reviews yet, so I wanted to give it a try. :) What can wash away shadows grip? Am I left to die in ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: no more

    Hi! So, Alohajuice, I really like what you did here. The rhyming works well, and it doesn't sound forced, which is the most important thing. The poem also stayed in ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Red Cup Wishes

    Hi, Jon! (I'm still taken aback by your name change, but I'll cope somehow. ;)) So, this poem was very intriguing in a way, and that's because it has things ...

    Jul 7, 2009


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning