Demeter

Hi, Kobain! I haven't read many lyrics on here, but I've seen enough to say that this is one of my favourites so far. I'd love to hear it with ...

Hi, Aianarie! I was pleasantly surprised when I stumbled across this what I thought was a random work, when I saw it was a sonnet. I've recently taken interest in ...

Hi, Pudin! It's a cold dark night waiting for the moon to appear up high sparkling with the lights of the scattered stars and from the our corners of the ...

Hi, EmiAnne! First of all I think you should clarify the genre of this piece. It's posted in Non-Fiction, so is this sort of a journal entry or just a ...

Hey, Hero - here as you requested. So, among the first things that floated into my mind when I was reading this was the massive amount of names/characters you throw ...

Hi, Streetwalker! I shivered as another gust of October wind blew down the street. People were struggling to keep their umbrellas from upturning and folding their warm coats around their ...

Hi, Vii-zee, and welcome to YWS! At first I have to inform you that there's a 3:1 review to work ratio on YWS, and it's going to increase to 4:1 ...

Hey Phantom. You have a rather nice balance of imagery and "realism" here - nevertheless, I think you could use more descriptive words and phrases instead of the regular "shattered", ...

Hey Silented, here I am as I promised! The setting sun, upon the open field, where we played and laughed, we fought and I cried. This is a peaceful image ...

Hi Kylan. :) I was actually looking another poem I had promised to review, but I saw this one and decided to read it and when I'd read it, I ...

Hi Tiff. :) Let me nitpick you first. In this dark night, of shaking, painful, fear-- Right, so I'm seeing this as either "of shaking, painful fear" or "shaking, pain, ...

Alrighty, Elinor. Sorry to have made you wait. This morning, I awoke to a terrific dream. During it, I did not realize it was one, because I seemed to awake ...

Hey Pgs, sorry that you've had to wait for this review a little. At first I want to say that I'm not one of those Twilight people, nor do I ...

Hi, Pen. This was such a sweet evening read, and it made me feel happy inside. I really liked that little rhyme in the first stanza, and I personally believe ...

Hi Carpediem and welcome to YWS. At first I'd like to inform you that it's one of the YWS rules to give two reviews before posting your own work, so ...