User avatar

Demeter

Demeter

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Inseparable

    Hi, Midnight! You did a fine job in capturing the moment. Have you ever tried writing haiku? I have a strong affection toward them; they're so pretty. You should look ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Persistence of Memory (1/2)

    Hey Evi! I'm glad you chose this painting – I love Dali's work, and this is one of my favourites by him. I remember a few years ago when we ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Find me

    Hi Onyx, here as you requested :) So you haven't written a lot of poetry? I couldn't tell, if I didn't know. I remember I was sort of scared and ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the Great

    Hi Gal. They say that across the Damascan plains where lions sleep with dirty manes and wish to howl but for bitter tongues may only bite the sword that tames ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Noise

    Hi Aqua! Overall this was a pretty piece. The idea seemed original, and this is one of those works that don't need to be full of action to be interesting. ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Lifespan Of A Butterfly

    Hi Jas! Wow – I really enjoyed this piece, I'll say it straight away. You had one of the best opening sentences I have read in a long time; it's ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Momma

    Hi, Chelsea! :) I have to say that I really like this. It may not be what I would usually call a story, you know, with action and conflict and ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Split Personality

    Hi Mage! The subject you have is interesting and you could get so much more out of it if you went beyond your ordinary, day-to-day observations! What I feel is ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Black Wolf (Chapt. 1 / Part 1)

    Heya Ash, I saw this had no reviews yet so I decided to drop by! Your writing is quite easy and smooth to read and I didn't find any noticeable ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: They would be sorry

    Hello, Irish! Firstly, let's look at the title you have. To be honest, it's not very interesting, and I can imagine it's just an emergency solution. As in, you just ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The New Year's Resolution

    Hey Shina, I'm not here to review this, because it would be a horrible thing to do on a piece like this. :D I just want to give you my ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My hot and juicy love

    So, Eternallyconfused. I seriously don't know whether to laugh or go "Er... right..." I think I'm going to go with the former one. xD To be honest, the title made ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Tick Tock

    Inc! Well, this was an interesting piece, but not in a bad way. I was looking for something to review, and I saw this and the title caught me immediately, ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Beach Man Blues

    Hey Hoopster! Considering you're only trying your wings with poetry, this was great. Lightyears better than my first poems. Rhyming poetry fascinates me, if it's done well, and I think ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Equipped with Melodies

    Hello Evi! So, this was very nice and I enjoyed it a lot! I don't think I've read many things by you, which is a shame, but then again, I ...

    Dec 27, 2009


Adventure is worthwhile.
— Aesop