Demeter

Hey, Jash/Kaka! I'm here because you posted on my WRFF thread -- but I'm not actually sure if I should be here, since I'm a judge for this contest. xD ...

Hey, Carbon! I'm here as you requested. :) The shambler gently rocked, almost lulling me to sleep, but the knowledge of my arrival to the cliff town of Spondekai kept ...

Hi, Danny! I decided to come in and take a look, since I love haikus a lot. Although I'm never sure what the plural is. Apparently, it's just haiku, but ...

Hey alfredsymon, Wow, errr, you are amazing. xD Okay, so maybe all the lines and haikus didn't sound as tight as the others, but I was truly entertained by this ...

Hi, Rose! I think this has the potential to be a great light-hearted poem, but I think you should make it rhyme more! I liked that there was a trace ...

Hi again, Upile! I've read some Pablo Neruda, too. I love his "Book of Questions". I think this was a nice tribute to him -- this is quite intense and ...

Hey, Inkwell -- you are a young, yearning poet! ;) I think this is pretty cool! I wasn't expecting something like this, either, when I saw the title, so I ...

Hi, Dream! I think you should make the whole poem rhyme :) Not that I don't like your current structure, I just think it would be a nice touch. Rhymes ...

Hi, ultraviolet! Well done on the rhythm -- it was nearly flawless throughout the poem, which alone made this quite an enjoyable read. I think the only - at least ...

Hi, Emmer! I liked this a lot as well. I think you write beautifully without trying to be too artsy or fancy. Simplicity is pretty. I especially liked this bit: ...

Hi, Upile! Nice to meet you. I'm Demeter. :) You know what, I liked this a lot. (And I did some research and found out the "la noche" means night!) ...

Chiko! Wow, why haven't I read your stuff before? Or have I? If I have, it must have been quite a long time ago. I think you're a really good ...

Hey Marrzi! Haha! I'm pretty sure that we can all recognise a bit of ourselves in this poem. This was quite funny and described perfectly what writing at its best ...

Hi, Geekchic! Nice to meet you. I like everything that has a this kind of message -- being strong, not caring about what others think, and so on. It's really ...

Hi, dregymayfield! I decided to come and take a look, since I saw this only had one review so far. This sounds like an intense rock song, so I'm imagining ...