DelanieHeart

Hey, I liked this poem. The reviewer before me did a pree good job on summming up the corrections so yeah, I really like it :) Keep pursuing poeming, even ...

This was a very nice piece of fiction. I could've did the whole big edit thing but I'm sure another reviewer got to you! I like the last line, about ...

That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire your black tongue, hints you’re a big, fat liar. That pale skin of yours, as solid as stones it’s a ...

Not precious at all -- but known to many, Then give me misery! Great poem, first of all and cute rhyme scheme :) I like the theme you added and ...

Hehe, I liked this poem. Short and Simple and Sweet. I like the idea of it, you know, going along with the rainbow. More and more poems are shying away ...

Heya, I could write about the grammatical errors and the parts where the words aren't transitioning right, but everybody has done that already for me :) Anyways, nice poem and ...

Ahahahahahaha, I read this and seriously laughed out loud. A poem about SpongeBob... I thought I'd seen it all when there was a poem about a rock but SpongeBob, that ...

This was a very interesting piece of fiction; usually they bore me to death but yours captivated my attention. I would write down all your grammatical errors but the reviewers ...

I liked this piece of fiction but the reviewers before me covered it pretty well. I think you should put a bit more dialogue into this piece because the few ...

I liked this poem but one thing that I really noticed and was evident was the rhyme scheme and meter. You changed up the rhyme scheme quite a few times, ...

Wow. I honestly think this is a very good poem. Your emotions are so visible through this poem and the feeling is powerful. It makes perfect sense and I like ...

Hey Rose :) I liked this poem and the points you included in it. I liked the part about all the different colors and things it protects. People often forget ...

I liked this poem. It was cute and I like how you got the poor coat talking about it's life. There's just a few grammatical errors I caught for you ...

I really like this poem because it speaks the truth. Too many kids are reverting to the exact same slang language forbidden on YWS. It pains me to find such ...

I really like this piece of poetry and it moved me. This seems like a really powerful piece of work but I'm not so sure about the last line. Perhaps ...