DeepCrystal

This was not bad. What I admired most was the quality of your descriptions. You've built up a subtle amount of suspense that has made me want to look forward ...

Huh. A poetic welcoming message to all of YWS. Whatever next? It practically promises no worries about this website. However, as much as this is a nice welcoming message, don't ...

This was a very insightful essay. I never thought of victory that way, but now when I think of it, it only makes perfect sense. Any of my English teachers ...

Welcome to YWS, historylover1. I hope you have an enjoyable time on this website. Ha, hope. I'll begin with saying that this was extremely long. It's better to separate it ...

Nice poem, my friend. When I read the first line, it made me think of Game of Thrones. I only recently started watching that show. I read this and I ...

Okay, I have no idea where this is going, so that can be seen as a good sign. But, at the same time I'm not exactly sure what this exposition ...

Why does this stick out to me so much? I read this and I think of it as a rallying cry for individualism--something I treasure. This is something that, if ...

Was this meant to be a comedic piece? If not, I apologize for taking it that way, but it is, I praise you wholeheartedly. I agree with most of what ...

Seems like an everyday love story: Forbidden love, "I will love you forever", "My one true love", "My heart cannot go on without you"... I'm sorry, but while this was ...

Hmm, I read this and what immediately comes to mind is a poetic premise for something very undesirable that is about to happen. It seems as though the narrator is ...

First of all, I would like to say, welcome to YWS!!:D I hope you find this website exciting and know that everyone here is ready to review your work and ...

That was quite the dystopian. This guy's determination to find a better world, only to see it destroyed was amazing, yet extremely heartbreaking. I mean he was so bent on ...

Oh my, oh my, oh my.....I read this earlier but I didn't have much time to give you a review, but here it is. First of all I was really ...

Hmm, this was a beautiful poem. What I really admired was your imagery and the way you somehow made me feel the poetry. It had atmosphere, it had depth, and ...

Well you set up a large amount of suspense and foreshadowing that I might as well think that this was supposed to be the prelude or prologue to the beginning ...