DeepCrystal

I love satirical tone of this poem. I can actually feel the irony that it offers. A king thriving off the suffering of his people and punishing anyone who defies ...

Wow, I was not expecting that ending! What I thought would be a sappy breakup poem ended with a sassy bang! Kudos for slapping my assumptions back in my face. ...

You were definitely not kidding around when you used the word "dark." And I must say I am mildly impressed. You have pretty much put many people's thoughts about "The ...

Well, this was very short and the very simple, yet with quite a punch. Jealousy can definitely stem from an overabundance of low self esteem and more often than not ...

Oh, dear God in heaven...... I am not going to ask you to tell me if this is autobiographical or if this is from your imagination, but this is still ...

Wow this actually felt like an immature exchange of mouthy young adults who rely on sexual and cruel humor. Talk about deja vu. It's always fun to read a somewhat ...

Very powerful and emotionally gut-wrenching. The song "Hurt" by Nine Inch Nails (or Johnny Cash) kept ringing in my ears. You're right, suicide is not an option. It is an ...

Intense. When I read the part about the swollen lips I was wondering was Jack responsible for that? Maybe her brother? Reading the first part, this felt like more of ...

Wow, heartbreaking and intriguing all at once. I know all too well how hard cancer can be on someone. My aunt died a couple of years ago from complications from ...

That was very, very creative. An educational institution for reapers. I'm excited to see what these "houses" are. Just the concept reminds me very much of Harry Potter. You definitely ...

Oh...my...Gooooood! What a chant! Well, at least I thought it read like a chant, if not a rap. Am I not entertained?! I am very entertained. When did card games ...

This is my first review in a couple of months so bear with me if I seem unclear or anything of the sort. Wow, this almost feels like a proverb. ...

That was intense. This boy definitely needs some anger management and fast. I can almost feel how this is affecting his sister and even his mother, which by the way ...

Okay, welcome to Young Writers Society! You can call me Crystal and here to offer you some insight. This was average debut. It had a good sense of drama and ...

Interesting. I hate science, but this this is interesting. I agree with most of what Halfbloodcheetah said, and I second them. And more. What part of this represents you? This ...