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Hey Paracosm, This is turning out be an interesting serial. You've got a clear and unique style of writing, which is great. I like reading this story a lot. I ...

Hey Willow, This will be a much shorter review than the first because I enjoyed this and I couldn't find anything majorly wrong with this. Eli finally has got the ...

You Willow, are extremely evil because you like to kill your readers with uncontainable suspense. But I must say you do it expertly ;) This chapter once again just shows ...

Hey Sarah! Thanks for letting me know when you posted this chapter. I loved the unique name of Silvernist here. I could definitely see it becoming a bestseller books main ...

Hi Dark Raven, Yay! I'm all caught up when it comes to reviews. Please do carry on as you have and let me know when you've posted more. This review ...

Hola! Mandy's doing it for herself, asking questions and is slowly starting to see that she has been limited in different ways. Although we know she trusts her family a ...

Look at that. I've decided to do another :P Well, this was one of those chapters where I haven't read the sequel book so I was desperately trying to piece ...

Hi :) Here I am for the daily dosage of The Descendent :) A good chapter, and it's interesting. I'm sure Mandy's memories are going to come up more and ...

Hello :D I have arrived as promised! I enjoyed reading this; it was something new to incorporate an object such as a candle throughout the story to keep it going, ...

Hey Dark Raven, Making it harder for me to catch up hm? I wonder at the amount of reviews you must be producing to be able to fund all these ...

Hey there again :) So I've decided I'll try and do a review a day until I catch up. I would love to do more, but homework often calls :) ...

Hey there Wow, this one has a lot of reviews. Seeing as it's more so people who haven't read from the beginning, I'll try my best to stick to the ...

Greetings :) Oh the tension just keeps piling up as she started to remember more and more. The longing for the colour pink subconsciously and the seeing Big Daddy all ...

Hola! Wow.. I never knew how bad it had been with Mindy being Demoness until now. I didn't know that Dave had beat her up himself to the point of ...

Ooh hello again :) Another great chapter without any technical mistakes at all except tense jumping. The chapters just get better and better the further I go along. I understand ...