Deanie

Hey there Arli! Here to get through the last chapter. I definitely mean it when I say these chapters are just getting better and better. Perhaps not technically, but storyline? ...

Hey Arli! So here I am to another chapter. I'm loving this relationship between her and Devon. I am getting to see the more appealing and sensitive side to her. ...

Hello again :) Here for the next chapter! This was well written, with only a few spelling slip ups here and there. I'm sure Umaima has covered all of those ...

Hello there Arli! Here to get to reading this (finally) I like the idea you have here, of these troubled children with their past. I'm interested to see where you ...

Hello again:) Okay, I'm taking into account what you said about originality as a reply... but it's still pretty noticeable. I just hope it gets it's own quirky adds to ...

Hello! Deanie here to review. Thank you for responding to my business, and here is the review c: Sorry it took a while. This review is special though, because it's ...

Hey I've read both chapters, I'm just reviewing this one first because it is easier to do so. Everyone here is rather trustworthy. Yes, they're all wearing masks and not ...

It's nice to see that Mandy has a mind of her own, and will disobey Dave and her Dad if she feels like there is a greater calling. I wonder ...

Brilliant! A brilliant chapter :D Well written, exciting and I love how you build up to that dream-like more perfect than anything situation. Especially where you close the chapter, with ...

Hallo, Back again to keep on reviewing! Hmm, I don't have much to say on this chapter because well, I don't know what is really going on. I suppose this ...

Hey Raven, Again, this is going to be a short review due to me not finding much wrong with this at all. Going on solely Mandy's voice now, huh? It's ...

Decided to read more :D I'm pretty sure you're just trying to make it harder for me to write reviews. From your previous chapters all the tense and grammar situations ...

Hey Raven! As an extension to my apology I will do at least one of my overdue reviews tonight. Reading this there were no minor details, or even tense jumping, ...

Hey there AGWilliams! I can remember welcoming you, and I'm glad to see you around and writing! Let's get down to the review here :) I think you're very good ...

Hey there :) I liked the meaning you've tried to bring across here, and I think it works well having the first line repeated at the beginning and end of ...