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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Four; Part 1/2 Scrapped

    Heya! Okay, okay, this review is quite late but I had a bit of a hiatus from reviewing... but now I'm back baby! And ready to review this super awesome ...

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Four

    Hello! Must be tired of me hanging around huh? I'm afraid this is going to be a short review. I am going to be a bit harsh about it. I ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Three

    Hey! Here to review the next chapter! So, as always, your description is tip top, nothing to be begged of here. You capture the setting, the horror and the appearances ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Two

    Hello again :3 So this is just the second chapter, and so much is already happening! I don't think you are taking it too fast, but it would be nice ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter One

    Hey there! So I stumbled across your work by chance and I have to say I'm pretty glad that I did. You've got a fantastic way to describe things... it's ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 4

    Hey Goldflame! So this might be a shorter review because I could barely see anything wrong with this. I like how at the end you kind of summed up the ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 3

    Hello again :3 Nice chapter you have here. I especially like that it's all in Phoenix's point of view, because then I feel like we get a longer stretch with ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 2

    Heya Goldflame! Here, as promised! So let's get right down to it should we? I think this was a good continuing chapter. As always, great description here. I really like ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 1

    Hey Goldflame! This is going to be another one of those stories that are so hard to review because they're so good! You've got a great way with words, everything ...

    Feb 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 12:

    Me again! :) Another interesting chapter. It was interesting to Sammy's healing powers and that adds to the abilities that the Jeweloid's have. I'm also pretty intrigued as to know ...

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 11:

    Hey Serene! It's been a while since I've read Lapis; I'm glad it's back up posting again. You came at the right time too, just at the end of my ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Lonely Part One

    Hey Pony! It's me again xD I wanted to say how much I like this idea, and I think it's a very good beginning. I liked how you've introduced Bridget ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Saphira

    Hey there Crystal! I mean wait, what? Pony xD I think this poem is very simplistic. It needs a bit more spicing with and playing with. I know you are ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Coping With It- Chapter 1: Cole

    Hey there! Let me start off by saying this was the best chapter or piece of work I have ever read by you. It has taken in everything you need ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Before the Mast: Chapters one and two

    Hey Spotswood, Remember ages ago when I said I would review this? Took me quite a while because I went on a reviewing hiatus, but I'm back now. First things ...

    Feb 11, 2014


so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton