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Deanie

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess

    Hey Messenger! Wow, this review is composed of a lot of nitpicks... Someone needs to start proofreading :D Okay, really this was a good chapter! It was a bit methodical, ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 2.3

    Heya Cesare! I hope you didn't think I had forgotten about this story... I will be getting to Vampirisi soon as well. But I wanted to finish reading this one. ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Health Re: The Running Commandments

    Heyy Timmy. Yep, me again. Can't get rid of me. This time I won't linger around for long because there isn't really much to say here. It's funny :P So ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Foreign King <title pending>, Part One *edited*

    Hey Shady! Here at last :D I wondered what this story could be about, and it seems like it has the potential to be interesting. I am going to be ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus

    Heya Timmy! Whoa, that took me quite the while to read. But it was definitely worth it. Even though this is quite an old work and had a bit of ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 2.2

    Hi Cesare! New day and new review as well ;) Again, the action never ends with you does it. From sink holes to tornadoes in this chapter as well as ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Science Re: The Existence of God

    Hello Timmy! I guess the madness has begun where I start going through your portfolio. Not a stone will remain unturned! I thought this was a tricky one to approach ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 2.1

    Hey Cesare! I didn't know all these chapters had been posted D: My, you do write fast don't you! I enjoyed this little flashback which I predict will lead up ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 10

    Hi Noelle! Wow, this was a brilliant chapter! I was not expecting that twist in the story, what with Rhys being the one out of this set to get some ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 9

    Hi Fortis~ Here to read the last installment so far. I have to say, this chapter is next to perfect once again! You've made Cabot out to be the perfect ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 8

    Hey Fortis! I find it really hard to review your chapters! They are just so perfect, I can barely find anything that really needs pulling out. So, please excuse the ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 6

    Hey Fortis! I have read all the chapters so that I actually know what is going on, but I thought it was time I read more of your stuff, and ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God- Part Two (REWRITE)

    Hey Therese! Another chapter! And I think you ended this perfectly. I loved where it did, with Jean trying to puzzle out what would make Joan one of those people ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Labels

    Hey there Jaye! I always find it hard to review short poems, so I hope this will be worth your time. Either way, I did really like this poem. It's ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chasing Dragons 3.1

    Hey Stella! Yup, it's me again :3 You do make it very hard for me to review your chapters, seeing as you write them so well! I think I am ...

    May 27, 2014


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— Holden Caulfield