Deanie

I like this poem. Simple, short and so sweet. I can't find anything wrong with it, I love it. I don't know who she is but for some reason I ...

I love this poem. I like to give compliments, I find it easier than to get them. Getting them makes me feel selfish in a way (i dont think others ...

I love this poem. I am pretty good at math but I still hate it. What makes it worse is that our math teacher talks forever expecting you to listen ...

Overally I like this poem but thre are some things that need improving. For a starter, you say And my loneliness prompts me to huddle up in my couch and ...

I love this poem it is really good, but I was looking at the last line and I think you could've done better. If I were you (which I'm not ...

I really love this poem. I could feel the emotion behind it and it was just so strong. Not a very useful comment but just keep on writing. My favourite ...

I think this poem is really good. The rhyme fits in with it well, and I love how you ask the questions in it. You think of peace, hate and ...

I really like this poem. I found the last line a bit weird though, about his/her cold insides. Maybe there could of been a better way to finish off the ...

I really like this poem. It is very truthful and I just love the images it paints in my head. I don't think this comment is very useful but that ...

I can understand the story behind it, but to me it sounded much like a song. Especially the last verse, All of her toys and all of her curlsCracking the ...

I like this poem, and it was really cute and the rhyme was good. I think the end should of had a rhyme to finish it all off though and ...

I really like this poem! The rhyme goes well with it and I like how it is some like the sea and then you like the sea. I love how ...

I really like this poem. It was a good idea and a very nice way to approach temptation. But I agree with halogirl4197 make it longer! It was so nice ...