Deadman

Don't ask me ask the author. Nice sarcasm though, great touch.

You should have picked up that there was a problem, and you coming in and being rude doesn't help a thing. You should be careful in poems like this. I'm ...

That's nice compared to you coming in and complaining about the topic, then leaving a terrible and unhelpful review. It isn't cliche, because those stanzas represent how she personally is ...

Try saying something along the lines of, "The piece was okay, but I feel if you added a little more personal touch, and deviated from the common perception, it would ...

Here you seem to hate the subject, which confuses me as to why you even bothered to review it. Your review was downright hurtful, and offered little to zero help ...

Hello there. This whole review of yours is a bit uncalled for. This isn't incredibly unoriginal. This is a popular topic, because it's a serious issue in the world right ...

Oh, and I had an alternative ending with it. I'm tempted to add it, maybe at the bottom. Eh why not, it might clear things up.

Thanks! That helped, and You pointed out several things I should have payed more attention to. As to what the clicking is, that takes a little thinking on the readers ...

Alright, that clears it up. Well then as a personal poem, you can disregard that comment.

I know it's hard to write a longer poem. It was great anyway!

You've still got to have some even if it's simple, but like I said, the emotion covers for it.

No problem. Remember with drama, a lot of the times it is forced, and dragged out, so that's why I drug out the replacements for the words bullets and blood. ...

I know, I read it, and I've played all the fallouts.

yup :D

Just helping out! :)