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Ok, so basically I really enjoyed this. My favorite line was: Deep blackness consuming, I know its strange to say that the first line was my favorite, but it was ...

I thought this was a very intiresting poem. Overall I really liked it and the theme. My favorite part was: then my broken smile, and my salty cheeks the moment ...

This is actually quite good. I am completely unsure of where the plot is going which can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on the kind of ...

Ok, first a few things I would like to say. First, yay to another 14 year old writer who is good, and second I am taking latin, but I never ...

First welcome to the forums. Next I would like to express how intriguing this poem is. This was my favorite part. hold your fire, heavens; the skies are all at ...

I really like longer poems and this one delivered. Not much else to say that the others didn't cover, but I would like to say keep writing because this is ...

I really couldn't go either way on this poem. At first I really liked it, but then as I kept reading I think it must have lost its rhythm. I ...

I thought it was decent enough. One positive thing I had was that it felt slightly relateble to a real life situation. My favorite thing about it was the topic ...

I felt that the arrangement of the story was good, but it was a little to hard to read. The only lines of the poem that made me stop and ...

I voted in between because I didn't feel as if it was your best work. I have read a few of your other pieces and this one just didn't seem ...

A note right now I am not very good at reviewing poetry, but I will make this quick and simple. I really liked the poem in itself, I felt each ...

Wow, this is a very well written poem. It is about average poem length which is good, but I only wish it was longer. To me it flowed very well ...

Only a quick opinion. Overall I thought it was quite good, but I did have one area to critique. As no one knows I am a Christian and have been ...

The title is great, but it is lacking in content. I felt that this prologue was too short. I do understand that this could shape into a great story. The ...

here is your review... I. Opening thoughts At first I was surprised to see that he actually went to a spy academy. His friend Matilda seemed like a very original ...