Day

I know you weren't trying to have that end rhyme thing some poems have but the first stanza was soooo close. Since It's driving me crazy I think a way ...

Great story Freshy, but why are you always high on red bull! Well you did a pretty good job throughout the whole thing and I really like the reference to ...

Since everyone already nitpicked the piece, and I hate to do that anyway I'll just give you a really brief summary of my thoughts. Basically like all good books I ...

Can't really say I was ever into digimon because pokemon was more popular where I was. This aside I really like how you didn't just put into the fanfiction section. ...

I don't review that much, but I popped in to say that I read all three chapters. The introduction was very good, It seemed to be just like a normal ...

Great first chapter, at least I assume that these two parts make up the first chapter. I'm not gonna review, because I really just haven't wanted to lately. I was ...

Sorry I had to keep it under 250 characters because I don't want a review, but what I meant was if your intent is to have it published then it ...

Hey it's Day! I was browsing My Feed, and it said you posted a new story. I'm not sure if this is part of a novel, but you certainly did ...

I noticed you already had the second chapter up, so here I am. Look at my review of the previous chapter if you haven't already. Only a quick few comments ...

Hey, I'm Day, and I wanted to pop in and offer my comments. Since everyone else covered the grammer problems I just wanted to tell you what I thought of ...

Just popped in to say that your entry for the contest was much better than mine! You actually took the time to develop a decent storyline to yours, unlike mine ...

Ah, this piece is excellent. Mine name is Day, and I shall give you a simple review of your amazing piece. First I would just to express that you have ...

Hey, My name is Day, and I shall review your piece today. After reading the comment above me I would just like to say that I agree with Elinor in ...

Hey, My name is Day, and I shall review your short poem. As a whole I felt that the poem did an excellent job in expressing the feelings and emotions ...

Ok, I'm just going to go through this, and each correction or nitpick is in red. The summer took me by surprise and I wanted to do something exciting. I ...