Darkhalm7_Melissa

I for one agree with KJ. Not very clear what they pesky kid told on about them. I like your word choice and all. And with the cliffhanger? Love it! ...

Those with the negativity on your repitition wrong. If they dove deeper, they'll find that the repeating added something to it that makes it run smoothly. It's quite nice I ...

So passionate. I love how you string words together so they flow so well. Romantic with a touch of mystery. Love it. D7M

Hahahaha! At first I didn't even get the point of this. Which I guess is what you were going for. But you still have a few spelling errors! D7M

Coolio! I don't even think I saw a single spelling mistake either! I definately hope to see more work from you! D7M

Short, sweet. Two lines with a whole lot of meaning. That's good. And you're what I'd call a fantastic writer. D7M

This might be a little confusing but...I was captured by the work I just didn't get it. Um...Maybe you should work on this so it's a little more fluient as ...

Mistakes here and there. Also I didn't really grasp the concept. The whole thing was just confusing. Sorry. Please PM me when it's redone. D7M

I must say it was very touching. Although you are missing words and have misspellings. Also it's broken here and there. The story just doesn't seem to flow. Correct then ...

Wow. This was touching. I'm usually bad at grasping concepts but you made this so simple yet complicated at the same time...Beautiful. D7M :D

I must say this was an exhilarating piece! Excuse me if I spelled that wrong...Any mistakes I believed have been covered by those before me. I look forward to reading ...

Um...I guess I'll agree with the others. But I must say...I was to caught up in the story to pay any attention to the grammar. It was that good. So ...

Any more? I though that was good. Although you did have a few grammar mistakes. If you look your work over you'll be sure to find them D7M

This was pretty good! But you do have some errors... Pm me as soon as you can get your stuff updated. Also, read this aloud. YOu can miss stuff when ...

Whoa. That. Was. Good. Please write more. I'm begging you! And no spelling mistakes that I could see! Sweet! D7M