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DariaTheGirlWhoLovesPizza

  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Good Reason Not to Move to America

    Hi. I loved this story, especially the emotions towards the end. I felt like I was sweating- And I totally agree abt the flag thing. At my school, we are ...

    Nov 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Grateful

    Hi. Here to review First off can definitely relate. I really hate when people complain about their parents, especially bc they don’t even see how much they have. Yeah very ...

    Nov 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Satire Re: Dystopia-Chapter 1

    Hi. I’m here to review Okay so first off I think the accident is very obviously based off of 911, but instead of the twin towers it’s the sister towers. ...

    Nov 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: From Anonymous

    Hi. Here to review~ First off, this poem is actually so fricken relateable. I have a crush on this dude, and ofc I would never admit that out loud lol. ...

    Oct 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Hey Hey, Goodbye

    Hey. here to review :) This poem is literally amazing. The name didn't really draw me in to review this however, but after reading it, I'm starting to understand the ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Boy Who Talked to No One

    Hey. I’m here to review 😱 I am going to start off by saying I love ur writing style! Like it reads so smoothly, and that’s real talent. Also this ...

    Oct 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: perhaps

    Hi. This poem is actually really inspiring and amazing. I use the word “amazing” a lot, but I am defnitely not using it in vain here. In this poem u ...

    Oct 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Forest-Poem ((OLD))

    Hey, I also saw ur comment in my feed! In all honesty, I should probably be trying to sleep right now. But who needs energy when u could review random ...

    Oct 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Name Poem

    Hello! Your imagery in this poem was really smooth like the "soul like a sponge" one and the bath metaphor. Also, kind of random, but your name is really unique ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: She's Not A Thing

    Hello~ I'll start with the things I like in this poem: Well, for one, title is really good. It's actually what drew me in to write this! You'd be surprised ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Untitled.

    Hello, I’m here to review! I actually really liked this. The emotion in this poem was really good. The last line was really impactful and the questions in this piece ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Theatre Re: Thinking is Dangerous

    Hey, I'm here to review! I really liked the title of this poem, I think it conveyed your ‘thoughts’ really well. My favorite stanzas were definitely the last two, especially ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: tragedy

    Hiiii, here to review! I love the shortness to this poem. It just zips right in and still stays stuck in your mind after the last line. I find that's ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My little sister

    Hello, here to review! Ima admit I'm an only child, but my cousins are pretty much siblings to me. So I can kind of relate. Especially with fighting all the ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Wind Running in My Hair

    Ello' I'm here to review! Girl, guy, whatever gender, You're a DESCRIPTION queen/king! Like. I couldn't write that much description if I tried lol. The imagery was really good and ...

    Sep 2, 2019


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind