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DariaTheGirlWhoLovesPizza

  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Good Reason Not to Move to America

    Hi. I loved this story, especially the emotions towards the end. I felt like I was sweating- And I totally agree abt the flag thing. At my school, we are ...

    Nov 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Grateful

    Hi. Here to review First off can definitely relate. I really hate when people complain about their parents, especially bc they don’t even see how much they have. Yeah very ...

    Nov 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Satire Re: Dystopia-Chapter 1

    Hi. I’m here to review Okay so first off I think the accident is very obviously based off of 911, but instead of the twin towers it’s the sister towers. ...

    Nov 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: From Anonymous

    Hi. Here to review~ First off, this poem is actually so fricken relateable. I have a crush on this dude, and ofc I would never admit that out loud lol. ...

    Oct 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Hey Hey, Goodbye

    Hey. here to review :) This poem is literally amazing. The name didn't really draw me in to review this however, but after reading it, I'm starting to understand the ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Boy Who Talked to No One

    Hey. I’m here to review 😱 I am going to start off by saying I love ur writing style! Like it reads so smoothly, and that’s real talent. Also this ...

    Oct 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: perhaps

    Hi. This poem is actually really inspiring and amazing. I use the word “amazing” a lot, but I am defnitely not using it in vain here. In this poem u ...

    Oct 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Forest-Poem ((OLD))

    Hey, I also saw ur comment in my feed! In all honesty, I should probably be trying to sleep right now. But who needs energy when u could review random ...

    Oct 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Name Poem

    Hello! Your imagery in this poem was really smooth like the "soul like a sponge" one and the bath metaphor. Also, kind of random, but your name is really unique ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: She's Not A Thing

    Hello~ I'll start with the things I like in this poem: Well, for one, title is really good. It's actually what drew me in to write this! You'd be surprised ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Untitled.

    Hello, I’m here to review! I actually really liked this. The emotion in this poem was really good. The last line was really impactful and the questions in this piece ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Theatre Re: Thinking is Dangerous

    Hey, I'm here to review! I really liked the title of this poem, I think it conveyed your ‘thoughts’ really well. My favorite stanzas were definitely the last two, especially ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: tragedy

    Hiiii, here to review! I love the shortness to this poem. It just zips right in and still stays stuck in your mind after the last line. I find that's ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My little sister

    Hello, here to review! Ima admit I'm an only child, but my cousins are pretty much siblings to me. So I can kind of relate. Especially with fighting all the ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Wind Running in My Hair

    Ello' I'm here to review! Girl, guy, whatever gender, You're a DESCRIPTION queen/king! Like. I couldn't write that much description if I tried lol. The imagery was really good and ...

    Sep 2, 2019


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind