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Re: A Good Reason Not to Move to America
Hi. I loved this story, especially the emotions towards the end. I felt like I was sweating- And I totally agree abt the flag thing. At my school, we are ...
Nov 25, 2019 -
Re: Grateful
Hi. Here to review First off can definitely relate. I really hate when people complain about their parents, especially bc they don’t even see how much they have. Yeah very ...
Nov 4, 2019 -
Re: Dystopia-Chapter 1
Hi. I’m here to review Okay so first off I think the accident is very obviously based off of 911, but instead of the twin towers it’s the sister towers. ...
Nov 3, 2019 -
Re: From Anonymous
Hi. Here to review~ First off, this poem is actually so fricken relateable. I have a crush on this dude, and ofc I would never admit that out loud lol. ...
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: Hey Hey, Goodbye
Hey. here to review :) This poem is literally amazing. The name didn't really draw me in to review this however, but after reading it, I'm starting to understand the ...
Oct 25, 2019 -
Re: The Boy Who Talked to No One
Hey. I’m here to review 😱 I am going to start off by saying I love ur writing style! Like it reads so smoothly, and that’s real talent. Also this ...
Oct 23, 2019 -
Re: perhaps
Hi. This poem is actually really inspiring and amazing. I use the word “amazing” a lot, but I am defnitely not using it in vain here. In this poem u ...
Oct 22, 2019 -
Re: Forest-Poem ((OLD))
Hey, I also saw ur comment in my feed! In all honesty, I should probably be trying to sleep right now. But who needs energy when u could review random ...
Oct 22, 2019 -
Re: Name Poem
Hello! Your imagery in this poem was really smooth like the "soul like a sponge" one and the bath metaphor. Also, kind of random, but your name is really unique ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: She's Not A Thing
Hello~ I'll start with the things I like in this poem: Well, for one, title is really good. It's actually what drew me in to write this! You'd be surprised ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Untitled.
Hello, I’m here to review! I actually really liked this. The emotion in this poem was really good. The last line was really impactful and the questions in this piece ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Thinking is Dangerous
Hey, I'm here to review! I really liked the title of this poem, I think it conveyed your ‘thoughts’ really well. My favorite stanzas were definitely the last two, especially ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: tragedy
Hiiii, here to review! I love the shortness to this poem. It just zips right in and still stays stuck in your mind after the last line. I find that's ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: My little sister
Hello, here to review! Ima admit I'm an only child, but my cousins are pretty much siblings to me. So I can kind of relate. Especially with fighting all the ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: The Wind Running in My Hair
Ello' I'm here to review! Girl, guy, whatever gender, You're a DESCRIPTION queen/king! Like. I couldn't write that much description if I tried lol. The imagery was really good and ...
Sep 2, 2019
