DappledCities

This is a very strong poem and the tone is very persistent and questioning which really adds a strong emphasis to the message you are trying to convey. I really ...

This is a great poem in the works! I feel like the loss of punctuation and grammar actually add to the poem and its tone of longing, but then again, ...

wow. This is a very articulate piece of work and it shows how much thought and care has gone into it. I commend you highly for writing such a thing, ...

This is a really simple and to the point poem, which I absolutely love !! I really like how you didn't bring in any concept of 'life' in the poem ...

Wow!! This is really awesome, seriously! At parts I thought it was cliche but I think it added to the atmosphere you're trying to create here. It's filled with raw ...

This is an awesome idea! Yeah, it can be fixed up a bit by looking at the flow of the poem, maybe changing some words or adding/taking some out and ...

Powerful stuff here. Sorry, can't relate to this but I can say this was really moving. The minimal use of strong words really made this poem work and gave it ...

This is really beautiful, seriously. You've managed to express the beauty of love without being cliche and mainstream. There's this wonderful sense of eternity in your poem, that love truly ...