Danni88

I love this!!! I can tell you really enjoyed this moment. If you don’t mind me asking, how come it’s your last African sunset?

Also, it%u2019s not really bullying. They just find each other really annoying, but I see I%u2019ve written it wrongly now.

I agree, this needs TONS more work. I%u2019ll probably rewrite it soon.

@Rydia @LakeOfCancer @Ooo @AlexTheGreat @CarolineGlitter @LadyAstella @ABC123 @AnimalQueen @KatieC

Nope

No probs, it%u2019s up to you!

:)

No problem! :)

Done it!

Thanks! This really helps! I will correct the bit about them going into the shed.

Thanks! Aisha has a hidden past we find out more about in the next chapters :)

Thanks! I%u2019ll make the necessary changes.

Hi! Thanks for the review! Yasmin and Ying are actually the main characters, Lavina is like a bystander narrator. I will make the necessary edits! Do you want me to ...

Awww, Lake *hugs*

Oh I get it :)