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Re: The Swan Goddess
Hi! Danni here for a (late) review! First off, I love swans. They’re so beautiful and magnificent and majestic. My dad and I go to the lake to feed them ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: New Years Resolution? Funny.
I am exactly the same! You could make resolutions on any day of the year, it doesn’t have to be on New Year’s Day. It’s not like if you do ...
Jan 3, 2018 -
Re: Crystal
Hey! Danni here for a review! First off: Wow, Crystal had a soulmate. I can’t wait to find out about him in the book. I also am curious as to ...
Jan 3, 2018 -
Re: Crystal Clear Chapter One: Speechless Affairs
Hi DG! Danni here for a review! Wow, this was quick. I was expecting it to be another week or so, so props to you. OK, nitpicks; Du t chess ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: Crystal Clear (Prologue)
Hello! Danni here for a Review Day review! First off, a very dignified opinion of this: OMG YOU STARTED CRYSTAL’S BOOK I CAN’T BELIEVE IT PLEASE TAG ME IN THE ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Removed by author.
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Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: ducks
Well, I don't normally review poetry but I feel I have a right to so here goes! I like the bit in bold, like to sum it up: this is ...
Dec 3, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea
Hi there Ielu! Danni here for a review! First of all, I love the way you describe things. The reader can really feel like they are there. Well done you! ...
Dec 3, 2017 -
Re: Star Wars/?? Fan-fiction
@rebelpilot Hi Jimss! Danni here for a review! I hate Star Wars, but this looks cool anyway. I can't find any grammatical errors, so well done you. I like the ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: Family and Friends (part2)
Whoa, this is WAY too long. If a work is as long as this it puts people off and makes it harder to read, so if I were you I ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: A Long-Expected YWSiversary
Hi there! I saw this and just had to review it! So, nitpicks: Er, none! I loved the potato comment. Classic. ...people either understood or pretended they understood what was ...
Nov 14, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 10.1
Hi Biscuits! It's been ages since I've seen Léo and Camillo, so I thought I'd pop in to surprise you. Nitpicks: Uhh... none! Good bits: I like the way Koji's ...
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: Gabe's Garlic Bread
Hi there, Danni here for a review! Love the acrostic part. That's really clever. You know, about an hour before reading this I ate some garlic bread! What a coincidence. ...
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: snow white
Hi! Danni here for a hopefully quick review! So, first of all, I love the apple shape. That must have taken quite some time. Well done! Now for the nitpicks: ...
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 7/9/17
Bonjour! For the survey, definitely a) Cattywumpus. It sounds like a type of magical creature. "And here we have the rare Cattywumpus in its natural habitat." Wow, I didn't realise ...
Nov 12, 2017